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Light Upon the Path

Sealed in walls of ice My heart locked; frozen frail, Ragged shardsduk-taped After a swift fall from grace Grim view of my shackled fate Opening my mind In order to see clearly Amending time lost Moving forward yet refrained Seeking a promising path Lily's, daisies, rose's, Stoping to sniff as they bloom Staring at the stars Burning like a tigers eyes Meek child I am no longer Reach for heaven To chase inner most desires Stroking fire within Aspiring to heights untold Letting inner light shine o (I connected this to "the great flower of life" in a perspective of personal growth from a troubled child to a positive and driven young adult inspired toward achieving greater things)

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Date: 1/31/2014 9:23:00 AM
A very inspirational write Amanda...well written...
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:13:00 PM
A fanciful write. To read this was a delight.
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Date: 1/23/2014 7:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Amanda Reslink
Date: 1/30/2014 1:30:00 PM
thank you:)
Date: 1/22/2014 1:32:00 PM
nice read Amanda congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
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Amanda Reslink
Date: 1/30/2014 1:30:00 PM
thank you:)
Date: 1/21/2014 9:28:00 PM
Inspiring write on the words of wisdom and congrats on the win, Amanda
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Amanda Reslink
Date: 1/30/2014 1:31:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the read, Thank you:)
Date: 1/7/2014 3:43:00 PM
Great inspiring write. wishing you all the best on your journey. best wishes. Pete. well done.
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Amanda Reslink
Date: 1/14/2014 3:37:00 PM
Thank you:)

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