Light Up

Reggie Appiah Ms. Parrillo English I/Period 4 27 April 2011 Light Up Hey man go to sleep aren’t you tired “I keep thinking how you can you die from old age” Wait what are you talking about? How can you- “Yeah, but I’m a god damn missed target” Hey are you okay? You confusing me “was that directed at Moi? Can’t be” Hey bro, explain yourself. “Don’t get impatient when it takes too long” What? “Drink it all even when it taste so strong” Man you okay? “I promised to give you me, the real me.” Well I think you should go to sleep “I’m sorry mama I promised they wouldn’t change me, I woulda went insane had I remained the same me.” I understand, good night.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 11:04:00 PM

Reggie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2015 4:54:00 PM

REGGIE, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 4:15:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Reggie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2011 2:26:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative poetry ..nice shape form too.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. check out our free contests..and good luck luv...