Premiere Contest WinnerLight that lights all lights

“we look for that light eternal  that does not come and go  the screen upon which life plays cognised in staid stillness slow” ~ Unseeking Seeker
I flow like silken ripples through mirrored lakes, a lotus sprouting from mountain streams, soaked in the saffron warmth of summer’s flare, jeweled in citrine pearls of purity. Awaiting galaxies of clarity to unveil an emerald estuary, streaming in sizzling serenity, oblivious to the searing strings of fickle tethers pulling this delicate psyche toward an abyss filled with superficial scraps, fragmented dreams, and empty conch shells, tearing my fragile skin with splinters and sea glass, reflecting the inflated ego of a wanderer adrift amidst ferocious tides. O sacred skies, adorned with starry scars, I’ve long searched in vain through a salt-soaked cave of confusion for twirling diamonds and fragrant fireworks to grant me an eternal haven of celestial calligraphy carved in halcyon ink, unaware of the silver flecks sparkling deep within my soul. Must I forever be lost, like languid leaves pressed between chapters of seasonal souvenirs, or should I rise like a mythical bird, engrossed in golden musings, a tameless seeker of zestful zephyrs? I am softened streaks of twilight, breathing ethereal dust, while dancing to the swirling silhouettes above cosmic candles, illuminating the orchid orchard of consciousness, as this heart beats to the blissful rhythm of an untouched breeze, curating magnetic alchemy, to harmonize inner music in mellifluous mindfulness. I am the light that lights all the lights, the undying glow within supernova lanterns. I am the artist painting my own paradise, immersed in topaz tunes of an Elysian empire, where divine scriptures of the Almighty conduct a choir of continuous compassion. So let the gates of your gaze rest in singing silence, listen to the unspoken reality, echoing like tranquil rhymes within a sonnet etched from mystical moonbeams, for between these lines~ floats the lunar wings, manifesting a rosier awakening, as my faith is the conqueror of crystalline constellations, forever basking in the euphoric glory of tulsi dawn.
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George Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 1:33 AM
Hi dear Empress, I am back to your very best poem to congratulate you on your well deserved trophy win! Simply wonderful....
Guptar Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations poetess for your top placement in this contest with a superb masterpiece in free verse. Every line flows smoothly with poetic gems in every stanza. Wish you a happy New year in the pipeline.
Poteet Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations, Ink Empress, on your first place win but more on a poetic masterpiece on light. I checked Google and found the meaning of "tulsi" is holy basil. You used "tulsi dawn"; and I notice that another poet used the phrase "tulsi perfumes". An enjoyable read, Ink.
Brul Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 12:02 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win, dear Ink. This magnanimous poem speaks to me in a way like no other can. From beginning to end, the lines are carefully woven with magnificent imagery, all uniquely yours. I am breathless. Keep shining dear Ink. This absolutely a FAVE!! ^___^ JCB
Liguori Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Your poem is wonderful.
Sharma  Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 11:13 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win in the contest, my beautiful Ink Empress! Your poetry deserves all the accolades!! I'm beyond happy, yeaaaayy :)
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Beautiful - "empty conch shells, tearing my fragile skin with splinters and sea glass" I like that - "tulsi dawn" <3
George Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 9:10 PM
Each time when I read your poem, I feel this is the best. But exceeding all my expectations, this moment, I feel this is your very best. Saturation is never in your life. As a poet, you keep growing towering high like an oak. A light has begun sparkling in me as I read the lines of this poem. You are indeed an artist creating your own reality. You are 'the blissful rhythm of an untouched breeze, curating magnetic alchemy, to harmonize inner music in mellifluous mindfulness.". Every line and every metaphor in this is catchy. Dear Empress, rise like phoenix, the mythical bird, putting into shame, all your detractors. Double FAVE.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Oh you come up with so many amazing phrases. Example. Singing silence. So paradoxical yet making so much sense. This is sure to score. You especially focused on that glorious light toward the end! You rock, Ink.
Rose  Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 7:51 PM
You are definitely the artist creating your own written reality, and we are the lucky ones that get to read and delight in your poetry Ink, :)
Edmonds  Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 6:25 PM
Wonderful poetry Ink, a delightful read… Beryl
Beaufort Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 2:33 PM
IE, to me you describe being on a quest while having the optimism to disregard nagging things tugging on you that could interfere. In the end you have what it takes to find the best things the universe has to offer. It's quite a delight to read and brings an internal smile and feeling of wellbeing. I hope you have brilliant light in all your work. Really wonderful for sure.
Buehler Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Very lovely, thrilling and inspiring! I enjoyed every line, but especially the final verse. Best of wishes for the contest.
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Dearest Ink Your brilliant poetry highlights self-discovery, the supernatural, and inner serenity amid turbulence and shallowness. Nature, spirituality, and the brittleness of human existence vs the resilience of one's spirit are also covered. You celebrate life's beauty and inner obligation while dwelling on your perplexity and seeking clarity. The poem uses strong metaphors of natural (e.g., "lotus," "mountain streams," "twilight") and spiritual (e.g., "celestial calligraphy," "sacred skies") aspects. Sensory language paints vibrant pictures alongside emotions that resonate with me. Best wishes for the contest
Onpaper Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:36 AM
lotus sprouting from mountain streams, soaked in the saffron warmth of summer’s flare, absolute beauty!!! Look at that flow .. unveil an emerald estuary, streaming in sizzling serenity, oblivious to the searing strings.. love the alliterations papi… I’ve long searched in vain through a salt-soaked cave of confusion.. me too papi.. while dancing to the swirling silhouettes above cosmic candles,.. absolutely divine!! undying glow within supernova lanterns… damn the imagary !!! I could get lost in this piece … artist painting my own paradise, immersed in topaz tunes of an Elysian empire,.. mmmm the absolute beauty in that line papi!! floats the lunar wings, manifesting a rosier awakening,the ethereal beauty is gorgeous.. breathtakingly stunning papi..
Read Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hi dear Ink, your title says it all, your poem is certainly impressive, have a lovely evening God bless you. xx
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:36 AM
great and deep poetry, images are brilliant and alliterations work with subtlety, thanks for the delicious reading blessings
One Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:17 AM
You always take very deep and spiritual angle with these prompts and dwell poetically on the line of enquiry... I would love to hear you do spoken word with this piece to see how your spirituality sounds.. as always you use cosmic imagery and nature to highlight your quest for the light and enlightenment... You mention worldly distractions and have some great lines like "I am softened streaks of twilight, breathing ethereal dust" and as always great alliteration through out.. BOL in contest..
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:15 AM
An amazing write IE, you take the reader on a poetic roller-coaster ride. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Gasun Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Wow! Another stunning write from you my dear poet friend Ink. I don't sit but I remain standing to view that brightest undying light without a single wink while reading your captivating write. I love this a lot. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent in poetry. God bless you always and your poetry/writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:01 AM
What a write from the first line to the last line.. Great Ending... A winner here. "Good Luck"  Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
Rhymes Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:46 AM
I sat here , and read your poem thoroughly ! Loved it
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Liar hahaha
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