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Light Suspended

I watch you bend the light, so that I'm able to see The essence you illuminate that's inside of me I never imagined you'd be with me still A moment A sacrifice I'll love you until Until the oceans evaporate The stars fall from the sky Until the laws of gravity break I'll always be your guy You make it easy to love you No reason to question why Jesus, you're God's perfect gift My parched soul's no longer dry Thanks for bending the light so that I'm able to see Nothing is impossible Love does set me free I never imagined my heart peaceful and still A moment A sacrifice I'll love you until Until twenty before never several minutes beyond eternity You are more than just perfection You're the one true Saviour for me All that I have searched for I am now able to see True Love overflowing protects me from the enemy Light suspended on a cross Your blood shed for me As you bend the light I feel it wrap around my heart It was always meant for me I knew it from the start Take this heart Jesus I know you understand I am yours now and forever Let me feel your light e x p a n d ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Tom Arnone

Date: 8/8/2016 2:18:00 PM

Artistic, lyrical profusion of love. Congrats on your placement. :-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/6/2016 5:01:00 PM

Inspirationally lovely piece Richard, congratulations...

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/6/2016 12:28:00 PM

Devotional poem beautifully expressed. A great congrats on your win. Hugs, Cloudy poet

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/6/2016 10:12:00 AM

What a beauty, Richard !!! Not only the lyrical words but the shape you have formed draws the heart into your faith! The phrase "Until twenty before never"......I love that wording !!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/6/2016 6:07:00 AM

Such a graceful flow of words. Congratulations on your winning poem. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 2:08:00 AM

RichardCongratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/31/2016 12:06:00 PM

ooooooooo pretty pretty pretty on so many levels!!!!! Love this, Rick! Faves!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Becca, I'm pleased you love it.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/29/2016 8:11:00 AM

Reading this beauty for a second time, and definitely worth it, Richard! Indeed, an uplifting wave! #7. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2016 8:36:00 AM

Good morning and thanks Paul, I appreciate you reading this one again. I made some more changes to it this morning.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/29/2016 12:13:00 AM

I enjoyed this, very creative, a fav for me! A7 too

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Arthur.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/28/2016 4:22:00 PM

I'd argue that this genre is SHAPE poetry that happens to rhyme. Love all the different things you did here RICHARD. Unusual metaphor, great capture of the small things that make us love. Bending the light in our direction or the greater things finding the light and being part of it! Good write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2016 8:16:00 AM

Yes, it is indeed shape and Lyric. Thanks for your visits this morning. I made a few changes this morning. I think I have finally finished it.

Mama Bear

Date: 5/28/2016 4:20:00 PM

I see you expanded the original and this is the new improved version Good luck in the contest I think this is amazing. Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thanks mom, I made a few more changes this morning. Love ya!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2016 12:22:00 PM

I seem to remember this one, Richard. Did you post it on FB? I still liked it like I did before ... written with artistic individuality. (or maybe the words were just edited it? Instead of romantic love it was instead written about Jesus?) ...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2016 8:20:00 AM

Yes, I liked my starting point and changed a number of the stanza's to envoke the message I was wanting to share. The love of Jesus goes far beyond that of romantic love. Still if He is part of our life, his love spills over into our romantic lives as well. With my wife I feel a spiritual connection beyond the romantic.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2016 8:44:00 AM

- Impressive and beautiful written, Richard - (7) - A fluctuating shape - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise, I like the new profile picture.

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/27/2016 10:40:00 PM

Beautiful blend of two bends, Einsteinian and individual....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2016 10:46:00 PM

Cool comment! Thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2016 10:04:00 PM

Great personal testimony of faith, shape was amazing! you never fail to deliver a masterpiece! A7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2016 10:47:00 PM

Thanks John, I also appreciate the 7.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 8:37:00 PM

I think I see the light shining on THIS gem, a top place if I ever saw one. LOVE that pattern too.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2016 10:47:00 PM

I hope you are right Andrea. Thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/27/2016 6:39:00 PM

Hi Richard, You have penned some good lyrics. What's not to like about this piece? I liked the message, shape and style. Excellent job. Best of luck in the contest. 7 :-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2016 10:48:00 PM

Thanks for the luck and the 7.