Light On the Devil's Chord - Day 19

The demon I had healed was watching me all night,
Silently crawling amongst the others,
Closer though, his strange arms stretched toward me,
And I was awakened, just before the crack of dawn
Cushioned in warmth, peculiar to the touch

“I want you to stay strong for the sake of your soul,” Said he, softly.
“For I know what he will do…
You are a pleasant girl with a pure heart
Do not ever forget the power you possess
As a woman of faith, 
Your intuition is keen and vital…”

His voice was that of a mature child,
Pure and pleasant to the ears

I turned away, my heart in pain,
Unable to withhold my selfish need for him to be there with me
“How can I resist such a Being, demon?
How will I ever leave this pit the same again?”

The demon sat near me,
Thoughtfully silent, breathing through creaking bones 
Looking around to ensure The Prince was occupied in slumber
“You have saved me, I feel it,
The darkness no longer overwhelms me,
Almighty God has spoken to me in a soft voice,
Reminding me redemption is for all…”

‘Ask, and it will be given to you…’ we whispered softly together,
In a harmony of dejected smiles

“May I call you my friend?
You have cleansed me, sweet spirit of light,
Blessed me, believed in me, when all I knew was this fate
When all I lived for till your light, was to his wretched gate
How can I ever thank you enough? 
I must confess,
You will never be the same, strange woman
What you have seen will never leave you,
It will shape you, assure you…
Mark you eternally grateful
But in the time of your leaving, please,
Sweet spirit, please,
Do not forget me,
I ask you to plead for my life,
Speak to Him for me, 
For I am weak in His sight
I shiver in fear at the thought of His might
Dear, sweet spirit, do not leave me to die
For I have changed, and I will fight for your light…”

I clasped the demon’s hand and hushed his desperate voice
His words spilling like a sacrificial offering,
Steaming, hot with passionate repentance,
His eyes filled with love and gratitude, 
And great, swelling fear

The Devil arose, in silent mystery,
The demon crawled back into the darkness,
His lizard-like eyes still pleading

“Another dark morning has arrived,
Why do your eyes glisten so?
We have our duets to sing,
Our voices together ringing through this lonely tomb…”

I inhaled deeply, respiring a joyous note,
My courage returning to my lungs,
Springing to life in the pit

“Yes, let us sing all the day and night, dark Prince!”

Together, our voices melted as one:
“Fight on, oh brazen of heart,
Fight on for our futures gleam clear
In our glory given, so close, so dear
The light within the darkness,
Shall mix in its colors, the surety of us
And the surety of all”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 4:45:00 AM
Will always be amazed by your talent, Laura. the intricacy of the plot will always be beyond my imagination. But I know this is what makes you special. Always a fan...hugs!
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Date: 11/17/2015 5:37:00 AM
Rest assured, I will answer any question to the best of my ability- and no offense was taken from your previous question! I will soupmail you further about it, once I have the time. Thank you for your kindness, and I cherish your honest and thoughtful comments Kim!~Laura
Date: 11/14/2015 10:54:00 PM
A most intimate moment of compassion with beautifully clear descriptions. Bringing the diffident demon into the epic was a smart way to broaden the story. The personality of the Dark One is so real, believable, and the duet, they've never been so in tune together. The vision of you, carefree in song is so attractive Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/16/2015 5:32:00 PM
Really glad you're enjoying these poems. Will be posting Day 20 in December. Can't wait for your next post sweet Justin. You are a big inspiration to me! ~Laura
Date: 11/14/2015 9:04:00 AM
OK, I get it now. The demon was saved (on some level) while the devil was asleep. So, there are shades of gray. We live in between these worlds. The choices we make can and will never be pure. I do believe that is absolutely true. Our motives are always a mess to a certain degree. I am always wondering about this.
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Date: 11/16/2015 5:30:00 PM
Nice observation my friend. I always appreciate your take on these sections of the series. ~Laura
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