Light On the Devil's Chord - Day 16

The vision of his apocalyptic age 
And the rise of the terrible Queen of Stone
Imprinted a harping chord upon my mind

I stood at the balcony,
Overlooking the depthless, darkening maelstrom
I stood weakly,
As if by accursed flesh I had been banished here for years

“What light travails
Against such a travesty of black?
Against such a tragedy of
Steady, evil victory?

To ignore such vintages 
Is to blind oneself of some unquestionable truth
A truth that inches its innovating way
Into the vessels of doom,
To fasten its hope
Upon such devouring,
Besmirching, corrupted
Passion?

I am desolate, O God
Parched., impertinent below all godless
The longer I stay here,
The faster such visions take wing
Even when such sins merely sift through the mind,
Their evils sour and soar through tangible lands

Tell me, Eternal Father,
What light,
What authoritative faith
Can thrust such a diabolical force asunder?

I tread among his lands,
Not Yours, Lord God
With the steady heart of a resolved prisoner 
You are with me always
Yet in Your mystery, Your mercy
You provide no answer
At times, I cringe,
For I dread that such an answer
Shall soon surface,
A fatal answer that will,
In the twinkling of an eye,
Break Our bond forever!

O God of Earth and Heaven
Who sustains my life in Hell,
If I am to fall short
Yes,
If I am to rise with such an enemy,
This prayer, please heed and rule—
I must be destroyed
Stone stands not
In the livid lightning strike of godly justice
In the thunder of Your righteous command
Death cries and dies
Ruthless wars cease,
And for them to cease,
I beg you, if fate insists we rise,
Tear us down
Show me no mercy if I must fail You
Bring me down to show the multitudes,
That glory belongs to none
Who murder such precious light!”

I trembled, near to hysterics,
The visions overwhelming,
And the Prince of Darkness watched
At an almost respectful distance
Though I knew his mind was high at work

His large eyes, void-like,
Burned like coals on the brink of disintegration
His melancholic tension crushing
My woeful tides in spurts of silent rage 
And together, facing each other,
We again sang. . .

“You, and I,
Upon a thrilling rise of waters
Together witnessing the slays and slaughters
Of doubt and faith,
Spirit and flesh,
Darkness and light,
Blessings to curses. . .”

Softly I sang alone,
“I will wait,
I will love,
I will learn.”

Eye to eye, 
Closer he drew,
His dark, baritone voice singing so sweetly

“I will wait with her, the Lion of Leeches,
Queen of Light or Stone,
The swells of triumph embark
Upon an ever-yearning throne.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/26/2015 6:50:00 PM
How will God respond to his vulnerable angel, alone, at the mercy of Lucifer's desire and anger, the song they sing is teasing with a tumultuous affection, an enigmatic intimacy that portends a union of their dark desires. Will she embrace his temptation as a truth to power she deserves, or resist her opportunity to be supreme amongst the female angels. I love the way you portray her quiet moments of confusion seeking the attention of her God. You are so fresh and beautiful Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/26/2015 10:28:00 PM
Thanks, dear...I'm thrilled writing this series. I can't wait to sit down and work on it, when time allows. It means a lot that you, an AMAZING poet, are sticking around for it, and appreciating the way you do. Lots of love! <3~Laura
Date: 10/24/2015 8:37:00 PM
I tried eating 100%. It's funny, but it is not good. You'd think it would be since the darker the better. But somehow it's just horrible. Tastes like chalk. And so, is the evil one completely devoid of any sugar? He certainly likes to tempt you. So there must be some in there. I suppose the world is not completely evil or good. It is this very strange mix, and we have to be very careful about how we act as a result of this capability we have. You are quite the philosopher, Laura.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/24/2015 9:58:00 PM
Very little of his sugar goes a long way my friend. But remember, she has been away from his darkness for 500 years --it's very overwhelming for her-- and the temptation of the devil is unmerciful in its intensity. But she is more prepared than she let's on, but so is he.... I am blessed to receive your comments. It is always a delight...~Laura
Date: 10/24/2015 8:34:00 PM
This dance between the sweet one and the lord of evil is one that has gone on for a long time. What is nice here is that the struggle is ongoing and there is not an acceptance of evil although there appears to be an appreciation and understanding of it. The dark side appears to be quite strong, yet your resistance goes on and on. This might be a trailer for the new stars wars movie? I am trying to be humorous, but alas--I do love to read everything you write. It is so dark. Like 100% cacao.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/24/2015 9:51:00 PM
Haha Come to the dark side, we have cookies! And um..... Maelstroms filled with lost souls of the tormented.... that too....but come anyway! ;) I always enjoy your feedback. "What is nice here is that the struggle is ongoing and there is not an acceptance of evil although there appears to be an appreciation and understanding of it." Spot on! I like your thoughts, and your humor. ~Laura
Date: 10/23/2015 10:28:00 PM
Goosebumps! Will the songs be set to music? I imagine them...is there such a thing as modern aria? :-))). Like an act in a musical, this has dark and grand written all over it. Loved the 4th stanza! Excited for the next installment...hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/23/2015 11:12:00 PM
That's a pretty awesome thought!!! I feel like it would be an epic production, however, going about such a task as setting this all to music would make my head explode...or has it already... XD Thanks Kim...you're very sweet. Yay! Glad you loved that stanza. ~Laura
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