Light Breaches Darkness

The infinite light Of the greatly lit pumpkin Piercing through the night Where the darkness has been breached Quite enlightening tonight
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:50 PM
Pumpkins are naturally orange in color, and candlelight gives them a rather eerie look at night. Good tanka as usual.
La France Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 5:12 PM
I love it Russell, for a contest? I want to thank so much for all your great comments and for selecting my poem for placement in you Autumn Fall Colors Contest, I am very honored. Love Constance
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