Light At the End of Wayra

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Light At The End Of Wayra One delicate break, An ingenious shift turns out. The route onward, love a twist, Perspective prompts oblique. The goal is nigh than long removed. ***The wayra is a South American 5-line verse ( pentastich), with syllable counts 5, 7, 7, 6, 8, unrhymed. 2019 August 14 *3rd Place* SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA ~~nette onclaud

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Date: 8/22/2019 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations William. Hugs Eve
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/25/2019 1:12:00 AM
I love stalkers, especially your kind--thanks Eve, Aloha William
Date: 8/22/2019 5:12:00 AM
Well done, William. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 8/25/2019 1:11:00 AM
Thanks, Line from this blind guy, who you can visit, just don't rearrange the furniture! Nah!-JK, ~ Aloha William
Date: 8/22/2019 1:14:00 AM
I really like the passion in your poem William. Congratulations on your deserving win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/25/2019 1:05:00 AM
Well you know Connie, you can see right thru me--thanks, ~ Aloha William
Date: 8/21/2019 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, William. Nicely penned.
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Date: 8/25/2019 1:03:00 AM
My friend John--thanks, ~ Aloha William
Date: 8/21/2019 2:21:00 PM
warm congrats on your win with this pensive poem about love in conflict, william... thanks for supporting this challenge!
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Date: 8/25/2019 1:01:00 AM
Yippie, Nah, Nah, Nah, --YIPPIE nette, truly, ~ Aloha William
Date: 8/21/2019 2:15:00 PM
Nicely won, William . Congratulations.
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Date: 8/25/2019 12:58:00 AM
Andrea sweet joy comes from you--thanks, Aloha William
Date: 8/21/2019 2:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2019 12:57:00 AM
Your name says it [winner]--thanks, Anne-Lise ~ Aloha William
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