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(I discovered the poem below in a drawer I was clearing out - it is certainly mine, but I have no idea when, or why, I wrote it; I have not changed a word of it, but left it as it is) Don't wait for me Where the black moment stoops towards the day I'll be fine, you'll see. The night is kind, the sweetness of The breeze, the still greater darkness of all things unseen. Who needs the morning The crack of dawn The break of day The fast fall of footsteps on shocked concrete The shrill call of blackbirds As the bottles topple like skittles, but into place. No, the night is kind, Where the serpents stalk in slithers And unhinged mothers go in search of their lost children; Where tree-branches scratch against windows Without drawing blood. Where ravens-in-waiting cluster Around the thought of death. What need have I for The last cold grip of Your lost hand, lost to him, Against the wrenching light of day? I loved you once; Go now, somewhere else another waits. It is the lesser pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/19/2011 5:16:00 PM
isnt it wonderfull to stumble upon things like that? very beautifull poem:) keep up the good work
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Date: 8/17/2011 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations Paul on this melancholy work of art being featured. It would certainly stand the test of time. Brilliant writing my poetry friend. Aloha
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Date: 8/16/2011 2:11:00 PM
Many congrats on your pearl being featured this week, regards Janette
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Date: 11/11/2010 5:40:00 AM
a treasure indedd that needs to be experienced by all... a taunting, poignant write.. absolutely breath-taking, paul! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/11/2010 3:09:00 AM
this is something my bf told me,its like love knows when to let go. I like this poem because it reminds me of him.I am glad I read it. Keep up your good work
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