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Lift Em Up

better to lift someone up, than to put em down, nasty ones stand on your neck, and hope that you will drown, misfit type seeks , with flustered cheeks , to rip pin feathers out of you, so they feel good, as petty would, the stupid buggers do, but grow we will, and kindness learn, and when our plate is full, the Lord will take us by the hand, like a whale takes on board the Krill:) see what ya did Gail Doyle little mate... Don Johnson

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Date: 1/27/2012 11:40:00 PM
don;t we all neeed some gentleness, don?... you make me swoon with your graceful expressions.. here's a lolly for you..:) huggs!
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/27/2012 11:43:00 PM
sweets 4 the bitter sweet huh:)
Date: 1/27/2012 5:39:00 PM
Some super earthy but poetic words from the word man himself. Great job my friend. Loved the earthy feel of this. Plainly spoken and easily understood. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/27/2012 11:45:00 PM
just cant find me dictionary 2 find dem bigger wordies?
Date: 1/27/2012 5:02:00 PM
Awesome write my friend! This poem is true in so many aspects..."...better to lift someone up..."so very true, and also so true, it's better, "...than to put em down..." I would rather raise someone up than put him down! It's just the way I was raised! You say it so well Don! The rest of your write is so very good I love the misfit's thought of fun and the kindness we learn! This is a fantastic poem, I enjoyed it a lot! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/27/2012 4:20:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Don. This is really good. Love, Kim
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