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Life's Vicious Game --

Shall we 
grate hours in tinge of pale?

Dear Life,  let me request,
The tiny stars to dance away
Above the moonlit crest.
Yet longing hands  and warm embrace 
Can't fill his icy space--
How one-way is this love
As I go     falling out of grace.


4/10/2016
Silent One’s Contest
Images That Make You Think  #2

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/27/2016 9:34:00 PM Nette, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/16/2016 5:15:00 AM Magnificent write nette .. congrats on great win! Login to Reply

Dineen Williams Gault Date: 4/15/2016 11:03:00 AM I'm back to say congratulations for this well deserved win! Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 4/14/2016 9:35:00 PM I really liked your poetic take on this picture, Nette! Congrats on your win:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/14/2016 7:16:00 PM Glad to see this with a big win, Nette. Congratulations to you. Login to Reply

Brian Davey Date: 4/14/2016 5:50:00 PM Very well penned Nette, congratulations Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 4/14/2016 5:37:00 PM Back again to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, nette. Such an award winning write. Peace dear friend:) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/14/2016 11:30:00 AM Yes. Including man as, really, of the animal family, the panorama is hard to understand. War is insanity, so the slaying of animal by animal. Your usual thought provoker, dear nette Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/12/2016 8:46:00 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette - (I has not had time to read so much poetry in recent days (see my blog) .... sorry :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/11/2016 3:03:00 AM Beautifully executed with masterful impact to tug at emotions Nette. Awe inspiring my friend! #7 ; ) Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/11/2016 3:04:00 AM Oh, I didn't know this received POTD! Congratulations Nette! ; )

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 4/10/2016 5:09:00 PM Congratulations on the POTD. My best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 4/10/2016 2:35:00 PM Congratulations for being featured.........A.M. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/10/2016 10:51:00 AM a lamp of silence drained...a remarkable image nette...congrats on being featured today Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 4/10/2016 8:11:00 AM Thank for sharing this gem, congrats for being featured.........A.M. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/10/2016 7:43:00 AM The slaughter of the innocent...for egoistic pleasure and gain. You talk of a very sad reality, Nette....it's always good to draw attention to it. Congrats on POTD...hugs // paul Login to Reply

Moon Flower Date: 4/10/2016 7:29:00 AM A well-written piece, Nette. And congrats on POTD! Hugs. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 4/10/2016 7:28:00 AM Congratulations Nette on POTD. Well done... Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 4/10/2016 6:58:00 AM Back to say Congratulations on POTD. I commented earlier. Peace my friend:) Login to Reply

Dineen Williams Gault Date: 4/10/2016 4:17:00 AM Yes, why oh why snuff out a beautiful creature just for sport? So eloquently penned, such strength in your words! This was fabulous! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/9/2016 10:02:00 PM You really captured the essence of this challenge. Love the tone of this piece. By the way, I googled that picture first time I saw it, and was amazed to see it called an elephant!! (I think that is what it said) Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/9/2016 9:06:00 PM Nette, fantastic write, it made me want to weep, you captured the senseless slaughter of God's precious creatures, wonderful 7 +++ Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 4/9/2016 6:28:00 PM This image definitely makes you think. We must not let new species become extinct, Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Rhoma Em Date: 4/9/2016 6:18:00 PM I love the contemplative spirit of this mighty poem--- something that can't be exactly seen but felt, yet man's savagery exists; poor animals! Your talent is inexhaustible! Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 4/9/2016 5:42:00 PM So eloquent, Nette. I suppose greed is a dark stain on humanity. I love your interpretation. Good luck my friend:) Login to Reply