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Life's Storms

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bring it on what else have you got you’re in the mood for beating a dead horse and won’t give up until you break me well get it over with it will take more than what you’ve thrown at me so get it on and give me all you’ve got how many times have you rained on my parade you’ve hailed, dumped your snow and sleet and even aimed at me your thunderbolts I may be soaked and drenched darn right I’m miserable but you’ve not won over me you’ll never get the best of me bring it on get it over with what else have you got Read on air by invitation ~ March 7, 2021 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on March 7, 2021 for contest LIFE'S STRUGGLES sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 5/4/2021 9:10:00 PM
Very Beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj ~
Date: 3/17/2021 6:03:00 PM
Read this one before and you can feel the emotion. Congratulations on your win in the contest. love phyl
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Phyllis ~
Date: 3/12/2021 11:38:00 AM
Such a powerful write dearest Line, I could feel your emotion and your strength within. Many congrats on your win in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2021 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated ~
Date: 3/11/2021 1:43:00 PM
How mighty and marvelous! Congrats on the win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:01:00 PM
Most appreciated, Caren ~
Date: 3/10/2021 8:57:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Free Verse poem, so powerful and it touched my heart deeply, well done and congrats on your reading of it on air _Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Date: 3/10/2021 12:53:00 AM
- Everyone is struggling in life, but some just hide it better than others or they just learn to deal with their problems, Line - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2021 9:41:00 AM
so true ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sunshine
Date: 3/10/2021 12:49:00 AM
unveiling courageous strength, powerful write, Congratulations on your win Line Gauthier, Let the force stay with you !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Paris-Maree ~
Date: 3/8/2021 8:11:00 PM
That's the spirit of the one is truly empowered. Inspiring write !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thanks, JCB ~
Date: 3/8/2021 5:52:00 AM
Passionate thoughts... GOD Bless you... Love, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, Gina ~
Date: 3/8/2021 2:14:00 AM
A very spirited poem on the resilience of the human being! Nicely written.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2021 7:06:00 AM
Tank you very much, Kudzai ~
Date: 3/8/2021 1:39:00 AM
You captured life well in your verse Line, but we pick ourselves up, never giving up. Hope you're well. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated ~

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