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Restless nights and guarded days; means once more, his heart has strayed. Though he vowed to mend his ways, past sins await penance paid. Years of lies shadow the past; cast by promises pending. And when good times fail to last, you realize they're ending. Months quickly morph into years, pressures build, and nerves get raw. And stymied by fears and tears, failing dreams start to withdraw. Passion's flame burns so dim; all you can see is heartache. For when love's left to fate's whim, hardened hearts easily break. O'er the years, even hope frays, for time, can't postpone old age. And you're running out of days; before your soul leaves life's stage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/17/2016 2:32:00 AM
... one can certainly try to deny their age! I know a couple on this site that do just that with their youthful spirit. Enjoyed the whole piece, but your last stanza was the best. I think one should be encouraged to follow those elusive trails, no matter their age. For some the cage is physical, and others its mental.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, Your comments are insightful, communicative and down right friendly, I enjoy hearing from you. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2016 4:14:00 AM
In our minds we may age, but we don't see ourselves growing old. The heart can love just as deeply in our winter years as it can in spring. I love the photo that accompanies this poem. It goes so well with your wonderful poem. I hope I am never in that cage. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 2/5/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, your comments are much appreciated. You, like I, will always be young in my mind, old age doesn't need to be a cage. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2016 9:12:00 AM
Emile, you have mad quatrain skills...This piece makes me feel icky inside. Thank god I don't feel caged, but freedom is a state of mind...peace & love, Jill
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your supportive visits and friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
I like this and the image. Peace to you and many blessings.
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Steven, I appreciate your supportive comments. Emile.

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