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Restless nights and guarded days chastise a heart that has strayed. And you vow to mend your ways, yet sins await penance paid. Months quickly morph into years, pressures build, and nerves get raw. And laden with fears and tears, fantasies and dreams withdraw. Empty lies shadow your past, cast by promises pending. And the years slip by so fast, you fear your time is ending. Today is left to fate's whim; forever friendships break. And passion's flame grows so dim, you can't see past the heartache. O'er the years, even Hope frays, for you can't postpone old age. And you're running out of days till you must exit life's stage.

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Date: 2/17/2016 2:32:00 AM
... one can certainly try to deny their age! I know a couple on this site that do just that with their youthful spirit. Enjoyed the whole piece, but your last stanza was the best. I think one should be encouraged to follow those elusive trails, no matter their age. For some the cage is physical, and others its mental.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, Your comments are insightful, communicative and down right friendly, I enjoy hearing from you. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2016 4:14:00 AM
In our minds we may age, but we don't see ourselves growing old. The heart can love just as deeply in our winter years as it can in spring. I love the photo that accompanies this poem. It goes so well with your wonderful poem. I hope I am never in that cage. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 2/5/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, your comments are much appreciated. You, like I, will always be young in my mind, old age doesn't need to be a cage. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2016 9:12:00 AM
Emile, you have mad quatrain skills...This piece makes me feel icky inside. Thank god I don't feel caged, but freedom is a state of mind...peace & love, Jill
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your supportive visits and friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
I like this and the image. Peace to you and many blessings.
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Steven, I appreciate your supportive comments. Emile.
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