Life's Sea Stones

Some the color of gray and knotty sea green
Smooth to the touch as they rest in waters of seaweed

Some with happy faces clustered in mounds
Some without smiles wearing frowns

Some sadly withered and worn down from their journey
All of them here and gone for a lifetime and a eternity

Some carry a message and a voice to be heard
Rippling fluidly like a poet writing their words

Some broken and scorned and afflicted beyond recognition
Some searching endlessly for their lifelong mission

Some shaped round and bright as the moon
Some shaped like teardrops heard wailing with the loons

Some washed away never to return, then some do
Life’s stones of the sea rolling wildly in the blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Parish Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 12:44 PM
A wonderful write to read Laura. Love the imagery.
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 9:48 AM
"Life's Sea Stones" is a great title for this intriguing poem, Laura. It's brilliant the way you are able to capture people's feelings in your words. Indeed, yours is "a voice to be heard." And I appreciate your comments on "Robbing the Dead." True story that's really "Got My Goat" right now. As if losing a father isn't bad enough!#? Best wishes, Carolyn
La France Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Laurie I loved this poem, I could actually see those stones rolling wildly on those ocean waves,I really like the line,"rippling fluidly like a poet writing their words" that is exactly what it is like, well done Spirit and Soul, Constance
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 5:19 AM
An awesome analogy here in this excellent write. Wonderful to be back and read you again. Love, Shar
P. Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 1:38 AM
love this write... what we can be! beautiful contrast! ~ Arany
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 6:24 PM
A great contrast...real life to the sea...there are so many similarities...well expressed in this beautiful poem! ~ Carrie
Golden Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Beautiful and vivid, Laura! I especially like the last stanza. Just lovely. Hugs, Donna
Gass Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Like us, indiviuals with ifferent aspects, talents and destinys. Wonderful write, Laura, with lots of great imagery! Love, Robin
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