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Just imagine... Ambling mazily Through an uncharted no man's land Wrecked by the most wicked of drought A screaming agony of thirst has befallen you Your spirit is steadily draining out of you Every ounce of your sweat, your life Oozing profusely out of your pores A slow, cruel death is sure to come to you An oasis is nowhere in sight, then a raindrop As if like magic, drips between your eyes And trickles down your nose, then your upper lip... You taste it with your curled tongue You sigh with relief, you dance with joy Thinking a cloudburst would follow You tilt your head up, close your eyes And stick out tongue, waiting...and waiting... To satiate your intense thirst, at last And then nothing? No rain. Isn't that a pity? Submitted for... Open Poetry 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot Date written: 04/21/2021 Date originally written: 11/18/2018

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Date: 12/31/2018 8:44:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Edward! Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/1/2019 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice!:-)
Date: 12/29/2018 12:49:00 PM
Nicely done, Edward. I see congratulations are in order . May your new year be very blessed. Hugs Eve~`*
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve!:-) Happy New Year to you, too!
Date: 12/2/2018 1:48:00 AM
Well done Edward! Competition was very high for this contest and I enjoyed your offering! Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/2/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment and visit, Connie!:-) Much love...
Date: 11/26/2018 12:01:00 PM
Original thoughts well presented Edward - you could have easily been higher up but you placed regardless - congrats on a fine write
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/26/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Craig:-) I'm really okay with my spot. The fact that I placed in your contest is enough for me!
Date: 11/26/2018 12:16:00 AM
Your unique and creative approach to the subject is really great, Edward! I liked how your incorporate the senses in your poem so well! Congrats on your win! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/26/2018 5:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Laura!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 7:44:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/25/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thanks again, Line!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 6:55:00 PM
Nicely done, Edward, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/25/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!:-)
Date: 11/25/2018 6:46:00 PM
Edward, what an intriguing poem! One tiny drop was all it took to create such a tremendous reaction --- then, nothing! Great imagination, my friend! Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/25/2018 7:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Curtis!:-) I really appreciate the wonderful comments!
Date: 11/25/2018 6:41:00 PM
Outstanding and intense poetry, Edward. Many Congrats on you win...Charlie
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/25/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charles!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 11/22/2018 3:27:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/22/2018 5:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-) Your continued support means a lot to me. Happy Thanksgiving, friend!
Date: 11/18/2018 8:13:00 PM
oh I love how you took on the raindrop theme. One of the better ones I have read so far, Edward. REally really nice!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/18/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-) Really glad you liked it!
Date: 11/18/2018 5:45:00 PM
Edward, this is wonderful for the contest, I really like it a lot, well done ~
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/18/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!:-) Much appreciated!

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