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Life's Purpose

From this heart, a vision of compassion glistens through my open window; as scenes across a half-lit room play like endless vignettes when eve softens: Withim my gaze, I trace each act unfold frame by frame, the interludes of kindness between strangers and beggars...lovers and children, allowing each other this warm exchange blessed by grace--a nod, a tender hand folded in prayer for safe journeys, a quip of goodwill-- For this is life's purpose, an earnest zeal to accord little gestures kindling peace in a world which desires tranquility, not rancor. Then to come from 'I' to "We' makes this soul understand how through everyone's eyes, I see mine. Your Best Unacclaimed Poem Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Originally Written 6/22/2019 Reposted 10/01/2020

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Date: 6/15/2019 6:15:00 PM
Well penned, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2019 12:51:00 AM
Calling back with congrats Nette, well done on your win in this contest - hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/1/2019 5:01:00 PM
A fine piece penned so well Nette, full of great imagery and expression of thought. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/30/2019 4:04:00 PM
It's always nice to see when everyone's happy and getting along. A lovely piece.
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Date: 5/30/2019 5:28:00 AM
Wow for the depth of your words! Wow for the warmth of your feel! Wow for the sweetness of your sentiments! Wow for the lovely scent of a pure kind heart aspiring beauty in every living soul! Wow for the nobility of a wide mind, generosity and humility.. the "I" melting into the "we" so that a better Life be! An astounding rendition! A beauty! Definitely a WIN and a FAV, dear Nette ! Your "Life's Purpose" is a masterpiece! Warmest wishes, love and hugs.
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Date: 5/28/2019 9:35:00 PM
Nette, what a beautifully poetic and uplifting piece. The power of your artistry brings radiant elegance to your poem of 'Life's Purpose'. Superb! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/28/2019 1:54:00 PM
Hi Nette, unfortunately the 'I' is the more common phrase used than the 'we' - but the 'we' is what our souls long and yearn for! A beautiful poem Nette. Hugs, Jen.
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Date: 5/28/2019 7:20:00 AM
A poem of grace and purpose..your words illustrate the meaning of life eloquently..well written as always, Nette.
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Date: 5/27/2019 9:26:00 PM
Nette, your poem has surpassed whatever the contest hoped to find. " allowing each other this warm exchange blessed by grace--a smile, a tender hand folded in prayer for safe journey, a quip of goodwill--"This by itself is the meaning of life!
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