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Life's Paradox

As violent roses pose, outer world, in peril,

Freedom roses grow, an inner world, a pearl,

Reality supports human fallacy!!!

9-6-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/25/2010 5:10:00 PM

hmmmm most interesting! Light & Love

Bri Brown

Date: 1/19/2010 5:24:00 AM

lovely. simply lovely.

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/30/2009 4:44:00 PM

Another of your most inspirational uplifting writes here Moses....with a strong message which is conveyed most eloquently! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your most kind words of encouragement...all is deeply appreciated! Have a glorious day~Mary

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/10/2009 4:38:00 PM

"the kingdom of heaven is at hand". You can live in heaven or you can live in hell. you can clean your neiborhood or pollute it. you can look at the roses or you can look at the garbage. which do you see? jhl

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/23/2009 9:13:00 PM

Dear John Moses, YOU have a very awesome POETIC talent Poignant and profound I think along the same lines as Ruben I don't believe this is a true Haiku But it is superbly done I find reading YOU very interesting When are YOU going to cowrite another POEM with Carolyn James Fraser is ahead of you I think cowritting is a great way to entwine POETS thoughts and improve the readers' Talents ALWAYS...HG

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 10/10/2009 8:43:00 PM

Moses, your writing is always wonderful to read my friend. This is an awesome Haiku. Hugs.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/7/2009 5:56:00 AM

Wow. Awesome haiku! Just stopping by to say thank you so much for your thoughtful comment and good wishes. All the best. love, shar

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/13/2009 9:15:00 PM

There is a lot of depth and wisdom in these three lines, Moses, and I appreciate your comments on our recent exchange. Not many know the situation nor the depth of love I have for my husband, you are very intuitive and thank you for your inspiration. ~Tru~

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/12/2009 10:04:00 AM

This is excellent, John. Much wisdom in your wonderful play with words! Thank you for sharing. Love, Robin

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 12:09:00 AM

Great poem John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2009 9:36:00 AM

Awesome writing John. Thank you for sharing today. Love, Carol

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/7/2009 9:25:00 AM

As always Moses your reads spark my own thoughts, help me if in block mode, inspiring my own creativity...I thank you for that and all your comments, they help me to improve as a writer.......Your friend......:JP]