Paulette Calasibetta Poet Couplet

Life's Journey 1

As we journey through life we seek to understand
                 With great strides of ambition our roads we expand

                    Our paths may narrow when we tire with strife
                     At the crossroads of hope we begin a new life

                        We ask, who we are and where we fit in
                Fulfilling our life’s journey, with guidance from Him.




March 22, 2022
For: J –Just Write Me a New Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Theme: Journey
Placed 2nd in contest
Placed 2nd in contest

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Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2022 at 7:43 PM Daily, " We ask, who we are and where we fit in" and sometimes hourly! Congratulations on your win! Paulette Calasibetta March 28, 2022 at 4:53 AM LOL! Truth be told, as long as we are evolving, aren’t we always asking ourselves the question of where we fit in? :)Paulette

Debra L Brown March 27, 2022 at 7:01 AM Congratulations Paulette, on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra Reply Paulette Calasibetta March 27, 2022 at 7:14 AM Debra thank you for stopping by with an "Outstanding" comment. :)Paulette

Constance La France March 26, 2022 at 6:51 PM Paulette, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance Paulette Calasibetta March 27, 2022 at 7:13 AM Thank you Constance~I am so pleased to be a part of the winning entries. Blessings,Paulette

James Marshall Goff March 25, 2022 at 7:43 PM This is lovely Paulette! Paulette Calasibetta March 27, 2022 at 7:13 AM Thanks Jim~

Michelle Faulkner March 25, 2022 at 11:28 AM Our journey to where and how we fit in can be long but rewarding, congrats on your win! Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 3:49 PM Thank you Michelle~ glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Loved your true ending. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 3:50 PM Hi Paula~and congratulations to you too with your Lemon Cake Journey....very clever. Thanks for stopping by to comment on my write, glad you like it. :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex March 24, 2022 at 9:40 PM "We ask, who we are and where we fit in" - True. These questions unknowingly fill our minds. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 8:55 AM Thank you Christuraj for your gracious comments. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf March 24, 2022 at 6:17 PM At the crossroads of hope, one hopes that hope didn't 'go that-a-way!' ~ Thumbs pointing east-west Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 8:54 AM Hi Gershon, thanks for commenting ... there is always hope! Take Care, Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose March 24, 2022 at 4:12 PM I can see you were on a pensive journey when you wrote this, been missing you, hope all is well my friend, hope to hear from you soon, much love vie :) Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 8:54 AM Dear Vie, thank you for your concern~life takes us all on a unchartered path. Thanks for commenting. See you soon. XO Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell March 23, 2022 at 2:32 PM A lovely uplifting piece Paulette, superbly penned. Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 8:52 AM Gordon, thank you for stopping by with such 'uplifting' comments. :)Paulette

James Marshall Goff March 23, 2022 at 6:55 AM Yes! Uplifting is write on! Good work Paulette! Paulette Calasibetta March 25, 2022 at 8:51 AM Thanks Jim~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette