Life's Climb

steep, rocky ascent -
divine source brightens vista 
summits surpass blues 
  

written 6/26/15 
for Senryu On Your Own Existence Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Parker Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Congratulation my poetic friend, a strong write
Roper Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 8:39 AM
You describe it well, congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Rhonda congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful senyru
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Superb write Rhonda, congrats on ur win!
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on a great win, Rhonda! Well done! Love, Kim
Celestial Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Great Rhonda! Congratz!
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:48 PM
HI RHONDA, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:51 PM
that last line is outstanding!! glad to see this again. congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 2:09 PM
wow, not only a senryu dwelling on human things but also has great elements of nature as in a haiku. marvelous!!
Wigley Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 3:42 AM
Yes, your Senryu looks lovely from up here.... Viv x
Vaso Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 12:41 AM
And to think some nights I have trouble to climb into bed! :)
La France Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Rhonda, beautiful senryu for the contest, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, not that long ago
Christian Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Well written its good and expressive
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 12:33 PM
Enjoyed reading your Senryu..Very descriptive..Sara
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