Life's a New Vacuum

Loneliness wears me from head to toe using zipper teeth lengths of excruciating, debilitating months that are capable of choking all my hope. I feel lifeless as I attempt transforming into a bright mood color with a sassy sash to influence an upbeat attitude capable of playfully lassoing fulfilling peace. There is but one thing in my life I wish would suck yet, my plugged in, brand new vacuum will not work.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:24 PM
this is just perfect for whatever the heck that imagism is!! I bet you have nailed it, Caycay. I love this one. Truly I do! that vacuum line. hilarious.
Adams Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 1:33 PM
love the way you executed this one, that ending summed it all up wonderfully...great penning CayCay :) hugs
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 12:02 PM
I think this is a clever take - a poem with a real difference life sucks and so does a vacuum cleaner but your vacuum cleaner doesn't suck, but in reality it does - complicated! Well penned CayCay, Hugs and Kisses. Jennifer.
Michael Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 6:47 PM
I can do with one too...Nice one
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Smiles for those last two lines, CayCay! Cheers, Gershon
Green Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 4:08 PM
That was cute my friend. Life sucks except the vacuum, just how it works I guess. : )
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