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Sometimes, when you attempt To reconcile what you see in The mirror each day, with the Darkness and emptiness of Incessant failures and mistakes, And you strain with all your Might to squeeze something of Worth from the torrid chaos And anxiety that seeks to drown You, all that manages to drip From the tip of that keen, rusty, Ragged-edged blade named 'Purpose', is the thinly-veiled Knowledge that there is at least A residue of integrity in the Recognition of the vicious fact, That there are some things You can never, ever, forgive Yourself for. It is brutal. It is Cold. It is horrifyingly lonely. But Sometimes that is all there is Left to a desolate and broken ... Soul. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Anxiety Poetry Contest", Lewis Raynes, Sponsor.

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Date: 3/5/2017 11:31:00 AM
Great poetry about the regret we feel when we hurt others. Congratulations on your win Greg. :-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mark ... really glad you enjoyed this one!
Date: 2/28/2017 7:51:00 PM
Brilliantly written, Greg, congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2017 2:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Charlie - I greatly appreciate the kind words!
Date: 12/6/2016 4:53:00 PM
This piece reminds me of the song with the same title popularized by SPANDAU BALLET........
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you - I had never heard it, but I just gave it a listen ...the song is very positive and about love, I'm not sure I see the similarity, other than the title, (as my poem is very dark and about regret, sin and sorrow), but that's the great thing about poetry - it hits us all in different ways. Maybe I should listen again ... thank you for your comment!

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