Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Lifeline

Line after line of fresh diapers
A daily chore for years
Clotheslines held six dozen each day
Unless weather unclear

Two little ones not potty trained
Now grown and on their own
They hold up a lifeline of love
Since the soft nest they've flown 

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Let Me Feel Your Lines
# 3. Clothesline
Written by: Sara Kendrick
March 30, 2015

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Noel Villarosa May 17, 2015 at 1:14 AM A kind of imagery enacting an objective, very impressive write and awe-inspiring. Congratulations, Sara. (^_^) Noel.

Eve Roper May 15, 2015 at 9:18 PM Wonderful write, Sara, congratulations on your win a 7, hugs

Joseph May May 15, 2015 at 9:41 AM Lovely write Sara , Congrats on your win

Kp Nunez May 15, 2015 at 4:35 AM Such a nice take on the theme, Sara. Reminds one of parent's accounts of how they used 100% cloth diapers for us. Congratulations! Kim

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2015 at 9:03 PM Very clever take on this subject. Congrats my dear. BG

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:41 PM Sara :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight May 14, 2015 at 6:33 PM Yes, you have imaged those days so well, Sara. Don't see these lines much anymore. I enjoyed your poem, and congrats for your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:21 PM Sara, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Funom Makama April 14, 2015 at 10:43 AM Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7

Monterey Sirak April 4, 2015 at 7:56 AM I love this one! I well remember the cloth diaper days with twins!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2015 at 2:58 PM - A great poem ! - Dear Sarah, I wish you and your family a blessed Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2015 at 6:31 PM you did excellently with this one, making it more than just about a clothesline. Mine is just for humor. I hope she likes both of our poems!!

Constance La France March 31, 2015 at 1:45 PM Sara, this is so nice, I really like your poem, A7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting, illuminating. . .

Kp Nunez March 31, 2015 at 7:43 AM Beautiful, nostalgic lines, Sarah. Full of love...A 7. Blessings for the contest. Hugs! Kim

Lindsay Laurie March 31, 2015 at 2:06 AM G'day Sara... close to a nostalgic poem Sara. Nappies are thrown away these days, but of course true nostalgia is with who the nappies wrapped. Thank you Sara - Lindsay

Edward Ebbs March 30, 2015 at 8:45 PM Cute...good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 5:21 PM oh how I remember this one - delightful write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx