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Lifeline

My lifeline was severed, I scream but no one hears. No communication, no oxygen. My god, I’m going to die out here, doomed to float around in black nothingness, prisoner of my fears, agoraphobic and claustrophobic, until my brain shuts down. And my killer watches. My lifeline was severed, I scream but no one hea...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/16/2011 3:07:00 PM
ohhh good one..expand on it.. my next contest will be Real, UNreal & Sureal ..I bet you could do a great Fiction for the Un real category! Thanks for reading and commenting for me! Light & Love
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Date: 3/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
Brilliant poem, I love that last line......
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:35:00 AM
Agoraphobia shuts us within ourselves. No one can extend a lifeline to one who is inaccessible, Jack. Thought-provoking poem. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Jack on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:53:00 PM
Very poetent write. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your fantastic win in the Maverick Free Verse contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. appreciate your sweet comment today.. Ron and I were married on the Amalfi Coast in Calabria last year on the beach outside our friend's villa.. thankxx for viewing the wedding photos and supporting my contest luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of john, jack
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:11:00 PM
So great to see you in the winning circle Jack. Congratulations on your worthy poem's seventh place win. Agape, Moses
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