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Lifeless Eyes

It's hard to say goodbye To the one's you love so Don't you wish you could hide Fom the things that hurt inside scared to cry for i don't know What lies beneath lifeless eyes People say if you love someone To let them go I believe if you love someone You should let them know Behind lifeless eyes i cry It's to late, now i need you More than before I stand here knowing ill miss him And he'll never get to know how much Behind lifeless eyes She pleads your forgiveness For all she want's is a chance A chance to love with no mistakes I'm screaming your name But no ones there to care I'm falling in love with Someone who isn't there Behind lifeless eyes i cry He's gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/20/2009 3:04:00 PM
awwwwww it does HURT! Please put your ' in because the verse is very good and deserves good punctuation. Light & Love
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:58:00 PM
Natasha - Congratulations on placing in Christie & Sharon’s contest – I apologize I wasn’t able to congratulate you until now, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 7/2/2009 12:16:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2009 8:57:00 AM
So heart touching, and beautifully written. Congratulations, Natasha!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:18:00 PM
Natasha, congrats on your success in Sharon and Christies Contest...Raul
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:17:00 PM
thank you for the coments can you believe i did that in 15 min no lie i swear
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:54:00 AM
I feel your write and now the pain ... you have written excellently to bring it to poetry. Good write.
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Date: 6/4/2009 3:11:00 PM
Lovely poem Natasha>James
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:59:00 AM
awesome
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