Life Unknown

Rest does not come easy upon this muggy unseasonably warm night
Eyes fixed as if seeing some other world, not the present
Life ordinary yet blank from pleasure, real sadness would be preferred to this unfeelingness
Depression's grip unforgiving, unrelenting
Prisoner though never executed, no trial of guilt
Sentenced to death, at some undisclosed future day, laughingly disregarded in this home,
Hopeless to become alive again. No chance of an appeal to a higher authority. Acceptance
Of this fate, today would be merciful, but in my soul there is hope. Hope of a glance and a
Chance for reconciliation of the former life less ordinary, productive. Regaled as worthy to
Breathe and feel the sun upon the pale freckled flesh, among the livelier folk, who know what
To do with a life, given freely, easily, no choice of the said life. As if magically we breathe,
And it is life, no instructions and no guarantees.
Tomorrow may see more clearly, the road set before, the haze removed before these eyes
Tonight though is heavy in past regrets and guilt, somber is my road
Tomorrow should be merry and playful?
Tomorrow...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hickman Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Beautifully written and expressed with deep emotional sadness but at the end I see that you see hope and for sure it is always there,,,Thank you for reading and commenting on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
Sweetheart Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Expression from the heart of pain ... I agree with Andrea..hope it is not a bio on u... luv.. Linda-Marie.. very excellent narrative...
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Gosh, Doris, I hope this is not biographical!! It's like the opposite of my happy poem! and yes, I am here right NOW, so I am doing one of my happy things, and you should be happy, producting wonderful poems like THIS one, which you write so well. LUv, Andrea
James Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Doris what a lovely write. life is the biggest game of chance i know! If it wasnt for mistakes and regrets, non of us would ever learn.
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Doris. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:41 AM
We all have past regrets,some regrets too deep,Tomorrow will be brighter,the followin gday dull,then the other day full of Sun,Guess its life with its ups and downs..Heartfelt poem..Charma
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Take it one day at a time. Enjoy something today if it is nothing but a cup of low sugar cocoa. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
Knop Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Won't we all wait for tomorrow? Most worries will vanish in another light. Well written, Doris!..Have a nice week..Gert
Cheeseman Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:17 AM
I am sure it will be a brighter tomorrow, lovely write Doris full of feeling Daniel
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