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Life Story by Peter White my lyrics

Life Story by Peter White My version (free verse) I came alive when first heard the beating sound, The strong pulsing of your heart Emotions consumed all around My soul felt anew as if my first new breathe Awakened into life Falling in love with you Memories like flowing tides in oceans waves Rhythmically moving slowly to a sound in sway Lifetime of beginnings with no endings After all I have lived I can breathe again For there is no one else like you Brought me to the summit I thank you for this renewal of my soul Where I learned of laughter You gave to me console Lifetime of beginnings no endings thereafter Awakened into life Falling in love with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/30/2014 8:10:00 PM
Was this the same song from his prior contest? I also saw an ocean in it. LOVE this. I see belated congrats are in order!
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Margaret Franceschini
Date: 9/30/2014 8:13:00 PM
Hi Andrea, yes this was the first one, thanks so much for reading, hugs
Date: 9/5/2014 1:05:00 PM
Hello Margaret, I so, so, love this so, so, much, the feeling that came beating, of just wanting to live in that one and first awake feeling. I enjoy the way you kept preferring to the renewal of your soul. Living is something I can relate to, --once I thought my life had no beat. Follow your heart, it seems to beat fast for love. Enjoyed... LINDA
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thank You ALL for your encouragement!!
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win! Pandita
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:50:00 AM
Magnificent write Margaret! N a huge win, big congrats!
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Date: 9/2/2014 5:34:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Margaret
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Date: 9/1/2014 3:24:00 PM
excellent write. congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Margaret Franceschini
Date: 9/1/2014 4:22:00 PM
thank you so much!!