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Life Rhythm

Life Rhythm


rain drumbeats my shelter


reach for the blanket you made me


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For Brian's Spaces Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 11:05 AM

Another beauty, Jim. I really like this. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 11:05 AM

hmmm, I thought it looked familiar. I just realized I had commented before, but it doesn't hurt to hear it twice!

Brian Strand

February 25, 2010 at 7:29 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

February 24, 2010 at 7:23 AM

Jim thank you for your blog comments today.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

February 21, 2010 at 12:47 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Debbie Guzzi

February 20, 2010 at 5:03 PM

Lots of wiggle room/Sheet twist/ Sigh/ Light & Love

Catherine Adams

February 20, 2010 at 9:09 AM

Ah, jim! I havnt been on here for awhile but I havent forget you or your beautiful words! This poem is so simple, yet so sweet and fullfilling! Keep writing, as I shall always read! ~Catherine

Charmaine Chircop

February 17, 2010 at 5:24 PM

Congrat,on your win,well deserved,Its so beautifully Romantic and warm...Charma:)

Doris Culverhouse

February 17, 2010 at 5:23 PM

good, enjoyed, congrats on the win!!

Simone Segal

February 17, 2010 at 12:00 PM

Well done my friend! love Simone

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 16, 2010 at 6:00 AM

Congratulations James M. Goff, on your placement in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand. You are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Susan Palli

February 16, 2010 at 3:42 AM

well done!

Sara Kendrick

February 15, 2010 at 5:13 PM

A comforting write in these few short line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Brian Strand

February 15, 2010 at 8:33 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2010 at 8:44 AM

NIce win in the contest, James! Luv, Andrea

Andrew Crisci

February 13, 2010 at 9:59 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Spaces, James I love this inspiring write...romance is very present here! Enjoy your honor and have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Love, peace and happiness, Andrew.