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Life Rhythm

Life Rhythm rain drumbeats my shelter reach for the blanket you made me _____________________ For Brian's Spaces Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 11:05:00 AM

hmmm, I thought it looked familiar. I just realized I had commented before, but it doesn't hurt to hear it twice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 11:05:00 AM

Another beauty, Jim. I really like this. LUv, Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 2/25/2010 7:29:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 2/24/2010 7:23:00 AM

Jim thank you for your blog comments today.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 2/21/2010 12:47:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2010 5:03:00 PM

Lots of wiggle room/Sheet twist/ Sigh/ Light & Love

Catherine Adams

Date: 2/20/2010 9:09:00 AM

Ah, jim! I havnt been on here for awhile but I havent forget you or your beautiful words! This poem is so simple, yet so sweet and fullfilling! Keep writing, as I shall always read! ~Catherine

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/17/2010 5:24:00 PM

Congrat,on your win,well deserved,Its so beautifully Romantic and warm...Charma:)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/17/2010 5:23:00 PM

good, enjoyed, congrats on the win!!

Simone Segal

Date: 2/17/2010 12:00:00 PM

Well done my friend! love Simone

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations James M. Goff, on your placement in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand. You are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 3:42:00 AM

well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 5:13:00 PM

A comforting write in these few short line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 2/15/2010 8:33:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 8:44:00 AM

NIce win in the contest, James! Luv, Andrea

Andrew Crisci

Date: 2/13/2010 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Spaces, James I love this inspiring write...romance is very present here! Enjoy your honor and have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Love, peace and happiness, Andrew.