Life On Mars

Given that under the Mars-specific support system
I am allowed a home
I will look to making more bowls of sea
Less foam

Tired here as I am of four closing walls
I would look for space
Obviously under a shadow of a grace
Resembling your face

My brain starves for lack of oxygen
I would seek more plants
From your fondling hands
At my window
Moving to and fro
Swaying and floating in the air
Debonair

Exhausted from the societal inequality
I would ask for proportion
In the size and shape of life
Your love in all strife
No knife around

But if the same humans settle in Mars too
With your handsome features my love
Will they spare you?
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May 10, 2016
Submission for Life on Mars – Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Davey
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Very thoughtful and thought probing poem, Probir. No pun intended, my friend. I loved the question pose at the end in the last stanza. You gave us something to think about. Many blessings from above rest upon you. Love always, my friend. RW
Gupta Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Yes RW, a very genuine anxiety ... Thank you for reading and commenting ....
Rycroft Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Very good written poem x
Gupta Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Thank you...
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