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Life On a String

Puppet controlled by strings heart led like useless pawn, without options Fake smiles Masked by pretense A fate tugged by slave's rope owned by master Threads of Syllables Aquarian Form Noel Onat 13 Apr 14

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Date: 4/24/2014 11:09:00 PM
good aquarian. Nice to read a poet new for me. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:53:00 AM
A reality very well knit,,, very nice worthy of top win Noel,,,congrats on great win!
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Date: 4/24/2014 1:44:00 AM
HAHA! That was cute, congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:33:00 PM
Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, noel
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Date: 4/23/2014 6:40:00 PM
Kudos on your win and the twist you put on the string. Nice use of the puppet metaphor and the edges of fate.
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:14:00 AM
never thought of this creative theme, noel.. you surprised me.. a well deserved top win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful Noel... Congratulations on winning first place in the contest... Verlena
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