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Life of An Atom

Day in and day out, white coated lab rats try chopping me into smaller and smaller pieces as if I was no more significant than a carrot or an onion. Enough, already. But there’s more. Those irrational humans throw piles of money at Elongated underground tunnels for the sole purpose Of smashing me into nano-somethings. I could think of better ways to spend a Sunday. When those “geniuses” get bored with trying to split me, They attach little circular imposters together with pins. Why they revel in their intelligence by playing With clown noses is beyond me. To be born an atom is exhausting, But I’ll outlast every one of Those meddling humans. You’ll see!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/5/2013 7:52:00 PM
This makes no matter. Or does it make all matter lol. either way I enjoyed the read. well done
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Date: 10/26/2013 2:43:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:47:00 PM
Hi David, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3 ...
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:36:00 PM
David, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:22:00 AM
Wow, a masterpiece of personification. Very well crafted ! Congrats n the win. One of my faves in the contest so far :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 4:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, David
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:59:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. I like this personified view of the atoms that make up our world being affected by science. Enjoyed reading it, nice voice work. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/12/2013 8:43:00 PM
Very interesting personification
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