Life of An Atom

Day in and day out, white coated lab rats try chopping me into smaller and smaller pieces as if I was no more significant than a carrot or an onion.  Enough, already. 
 
But there’s more.  Those irrational humans throw piles of money at
Elongated underground tunnels for the sole purpose
Of smashing me into nano-somethings.
I could think of better ways to spend a Sunday.

When those “geniuses” get bored with trying to split me, 
They attach little circular imposters together with pins.
Why they revel in their intelligence by playing
With clown noses is beyond me.

To be born an atom is exhausting,
But I’ll outlast every one of
Those meddling humans.
You’ll see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Inka Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:52 PM
This makes no matter. Or does it make all matter lol. either way I enjoyed the read. well done
Guzzi Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:47 PM
Hi David, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3 ...
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:36 PM
David, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Wow, a masterpiece of personification. Very well crafted ! Congrats n the win. One of my faves in the contest so far :)
Mehta Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, David
Harper Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Congratulation on your win. I like this personified view of the atoms that make up our world being affected by science. Enjoyed reading it, nice voice work. Thanks much for entering my contest.
Niehoff Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Very interesting personification
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