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Life of a Souper (Tribute to all Soupers)

Rhyming, chiming, keeping in time, Mind of a poet line after line. Creative, clever, twisting of words, Sometimes the rhymes come only in thirds. Struggle, problems, writers block here, Pondering subjects keeping mind clear. Inspired, encouraged, words now flow, Refreshing your mind helping you grow. Excited, wired, publishing your work, Waiting for comments going berserk. Scared, afraid, that no one will like, The words you wrote may cause a strike. Praises, glory, come flooding your way, Sharing thoughts from your words displayed. Growth, rebirth, are traits from the soup, Accepted by all part of the group. Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 06/16/09

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Date: 7/7/2009 11:52:00 PM
Amazing exactly how I felt when I first join poetrysoup, I think I am worse now... lol but great write I love it!
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Date: 6/18/2009 2:41:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to our Soup family! Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts in a creative way. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:01:00 AM
Terrific crafting in your tribute to the Soupers Poets Nathan, it runs as pure as honey>>James
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Date: 6/17/2009 5:57:00 PM
Writers block does not exist, if nothing else; describe a kiss. Believe or not that is very hard to do without getting turned on.-AA
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Date: 6/17/2009 1:49:00 PM
wonderful and sweet,nice write indeed--charma
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Date: 6/17/2009 1:36:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to this wonderful group at the soup!! Nice one Nathan!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/17/2009 10:27:00 AM
Nathan Beautifully written. All seeds bare fruit here! Thanks for your lovely sentiments. Love Light Truth Patricia Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/17/2009 9:46:00 AM
You certainly capture the way Soupers' poems keep us pondering subjects we would otherwise ignore. But we shouldn't be afraid that our work will not be well received. If it "speaks" to just one individual, even the writer himself, that should meet the goal of self-fulfillment. Nice tribute the work and processes that envelop all writers. Each wants to be heard, no doubt. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2009 9:37:00 AM
Good work the flow.
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Date: 6/17/2009 9:34:00 AM
This is good
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Date: 6/17/2009 9:25:00 AM
Nathen ,Bang on with your perfect rhyming piece . Write onnnnnnn ...
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