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Life Motto

Live everyday on earth like its your last

I have heard it be said

Though not the wisest motto for me

As my days would be spent eating chocolate in bed

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Valsa George

Date: 11/20/2024 8:43:00 PM

I too used to eat a lot of chocolates. Now I have almost crossed the pre diabetic stage and my doctor has advised me to curtail the consumption of sweets... ! Deb, you better take precautions to live longer and enjoy.... :)

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:44:00 PM

Hi Valsa .....l love my chocolate not healthy l know but alas!! Ha.....thankyou.. Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/18/2024 2:30:00 PM

Come on, Deb. Rally, girl. You WOULD NOT DO THAT. How depressing! Tell me it's not true!

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:37:00 PM

I would not lie my dearest!! Hehe....Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2024 9:54:00 AM

Love your "Life Motto" write. Great Last Line... In bed eating chocolate sounds like the way to go. Maybe I should try it. Hahaha!!! Have a great day writing away.............

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:39:00 PM

Death by chocolate...both so bad l think Paula!! Ha...thanks my friend! Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/12/2024 1:51:00 PM

Thanks for this poem of simple pleasures.

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:38:00 PM

You are so very welcome Hilda! Debx

John Read

Date: 11/12/2024 8:27:00 AM

What s way to go, enjoy your chocolate Deb.xx

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:44:00 PM

Indeed John indeed! Thanks...Debx

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:39:00 PM

Indeed John indeed! Thanks...Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/12/2024 6:50:00 AM

Dear Deb, I have to show this to my wife because I always say that she eats a lot of chocolate, especially dark chocolate M&Ms. Death by Chocolate! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:42:00 PM

Death by chocolate not the worst death imaginable me thinks Daniel....at least l would die with a chocolately smile on my face!! Thanks.. Debx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/11/2024 4:34:00 PM

Li lke your appetizing motto! Not being a rabbit, i do not favor carrots, Chocolate has benefial effects as wll.just dont eat a boxful. People dive into breads and cakes and think nothing of it?not all breads are good for us either,,,but nobody beats us up for that, do they!

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2024 12:37:00 PM

I cannot stop at one Choccy Pangie...its either the whole bar or nuffink haha!! Thankyou for your comment my friend! Debx

David Crandall

Date: 11/11/2024 2:31:00 PM

haha, well, you have an adage to support you if you do want to eat the chocolate, but if you don't, and have a little extra, I could take it off your hands.

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2024 3:29:00 PM

Come on over David…l always like to share!! Thanks my friend….Debx