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-Life Motto

Live everyday on earth like its your last

I have heard it be said

Though not the wisest motto for me

As my days would be spent eating chocolate in bed

Copyright © Deb M | Year Posted 2024

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November 20, 2024 at 8:43 PM

I too used to eat a lot of chocolates. Now I have almost crossed the pre diabetic stage and my doctor has advised me to curtail the consumption of sweets... ! Deb, you better take precautions to live longer and enjoy.... :)

December 11, 2024 at 12:44 PM

Hi Valsa .....l love my chocolate not healthy l know but alas!! Ha.....thankyou.. Debx

November 18, 2024 at 2:30 PM

Come on, Deb. Rally, girl. You WOULD NOT DO THAT. How depressing! Tell me it's not true!

December 11, 2024 at 12:37 PM

I would not lie my dearest!! Hehe....Debx

Paula Goldsmith

November 14, 2024 at 9:54 AM

Love your "Life Motto" write. Great Last Line... In bed eating chocolate sounds like the way to go. Maybe I should try it. Hahaha!!! Have a great day writing away.............

December 11, 2024 at 12:39 PM

Death by chocolate...both so bad l think Paula!! Ha...thanks my friend! Debx

Hilda Greenhough

November 12, 2024 at 1:51 PM

Thanks for this poem of simple pleasures.

December 11, 2024 at 12:38 PM

You are so very welcome Hilda! Debx

November 12, 2024 at 8:27 AM

What s way to go, enjoy your chocolate Deb.xx

December 11, 2024 at 12:39 PM

Indeed John indeed! Thanks...Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 12, 2024 at 6:50 AM

Dear Deb, I have to show this to my wife because I always say that she eats a lot of chocolate, especially dark chocolate M&Ms. Death by Chocolate! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

December 11, 2024 at 12:42 PM

Death by chocolate not the worst death imaginable me thinks Daniel....at least l would die with a chocolately smile on my face!! Thanks.. Debx

Panagiota Romios

November 11, 2024 at 4:34 PM

Li lke your appetizing motto! Not being a rabbit, i do not favor carrots, Chocolate has benefial effects as wll.just dont eat a boxful. People dive into breads and cakes and think nothing of it?not all breads are good for us either,,,but nobody beats us up for that, do they!

December 11, 2024 at 12:37 PM

I cannot stop at one Choccy Pangie...its either the whole bar or nuffink haha!! Thankyou for your comment my friend! Debx

November 11, 2024 at 2:31 PM

haha, well, you have an adage to support you if you do want to eat the chocolate, but if you don't, and have a little extra, I could take it off your hands.

November 11, 2024 at 3:29 PM

Come on over David…l always like to share!! Thanks my friend….Debx

November 11, 2024 at 1:39 PM

Ha! Good plan, Deb!

November 11, 2024 at 3:28 PM

Perfect plan Ilene….chocolate in bed with the T.V on and no guilt!! Ha! Debx

November 11, 2024 at 10:57 AM

Lol. Beautiful short poem.

November 11, 2024 at 3:27 PM

Thanks Jay….always lovely seeing your smiling face my friend! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 11, 2024 at 8:39 AM

- Save some chocolate for me, Deb :) - hugs

November 11, 2024 at 3:26 PM

Will do Sunshine! Hehe…..Cuddles…Debx

November 11, 2024 at 7:59 AM

Chocolate is everyone's downfall. What's wrong with a raw carrot lol Tom

November 11, 2024 at 3:25 PM

Leave the carrots for the rabbits in this situation l do believe Tom!! Ha……Debx

November 11, 2024 at 6:01 AM

Ha ha ha. loved this one Deb. A favorite...

November 11, 2024 at 3:22 PM

A favourite is always so special….thanks Michael! Debx

November 11, 2024 at 5:09 AM

As you wish... somedays. ;-)

November 11, 2024 at 3:21 PM

Just love choccy and bed…a wonderful combo indeed!! Thankyou ….. Debx

November 11, 2024 at 5:06 AM

very nice poem,put a smile on my face.Thank you for sharing!

November 11, 2024 at 3:20 PM

Hi Kenisha….glad it put a smile on your face! Thankyou for commenting and nice to meet you! Debx

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