Edward Ebbs Poet Choka

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Edward J Ebbs - April 10, 2015

Life Matters

Life does not stand still
If we look, we find friendship
There is always love
Sorrowfully, we look at death
There is always hate
Our days begin with sunlight
The night has darkness
Hope is the light of the moon
We only need one
One light to end the darkness
Your life does matter
Let your light shine fore others
Hope is the light from your life

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Funom Makama May 28, 2015 at 10:36 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7! Edward Ebbs May 28, 2015 at 2:35 PM Thank you Funom :)

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2015 at 11:14 PM an inspirational choka!! so nice, Ed. Edward Ebbs May 9, 2015 at 11:58 PM Thank you Andrea:)

Kelly Deschler April 27, 2015 at 12:27 AM This is true of our poetry, too. We may be inspiring others with our words and not even realize it... Love the positive message you send in this beautiful poem, Ed! Edward Ebbs April 27, 2015 at 2:07 PM Aww...thank you Kelly :)

Constance La France April 11, 2015 at 9:06 AM Ed, your poem has a beautiful message, 7, I think life should be about believing, patience, courage, peace, love and thanks for visiting my poem, defeating death Edward Ebbs April 11, 2015 at 4:20 PM I agree, thank you :)