Life Lesson

I can write a sonnet in a moment
and with that I pretty much sum my life.
I spot a comet in the firmanent,
that bare covers wasted effort and strife.
I look at a life that is sore lacking,
and wonder at how I avoid substance.
I run to and fro without much slacking.
It is a cover for an empty dance.
I seem to be always pushing the edge.
I know well it is the wrong edge to push.
Rail against those who push me to the ledge,
knowing I gave a target ripe and lush.
I long to do work that is remembered,
live a life with no excuses tendered
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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January 14, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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January 12, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Beautifully written, Ahellas.
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January 11, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week >> James
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January 11, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Thankk you for sharing your very expressive sonnet, Ahellas. Lainie
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January 11, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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January 10, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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January 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Nice use of rhyme. I really like your closing line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 10, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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