Life Is Like a Maypole

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LIFE IS LIKE A MAYPOLE Outstretch above are blue skies and golden sunshine as train of threads is softly thug and braid to a pole. Behold, this sky high pole of bright crayon colors, they speak slowly about life in quite a number. . . Sturdy wooden pole standing high and tall is like a man endowed with wit and strength The lengthy colored ribbons children install are the shifting, rolling faces of life's events Black as night sometimes dawn in life, one maybe blue but not long, instead do stand and chase rainbows on green belt bend. Being a tickled pink to explore, never strife! See, how the color red blush as it dance in the wind so must we as we share love along kinship line we aren't all born with a green finger yet, each kindness touch, grin lingers! Shed that yellow-bellied skin to mingle without any charign. Our life is given by God in silver plate. Hence, let our daily goal be a red-letter day! If we do, earth and sky may wed of rapport like the ribbons together pulled and blend by hands of dancing children that mend... Raising the Maypole aloft with ribbon pour so is a lived life despite black and blues decor. As the threads slide smoothly in span of minutes we, humans, must climb to reach our full limits. The intertwining colors that fused, all roar salad differences of man can be sorted, united to be one. Screaming colors tickle lowly spirits' to fire daring man to live before his body will retire. . . Living life to the fullest before each setting sun! _____________________________________________________________ ©O.E. Guillermo 11:23 pm-- February 02, 2015 Sponsor: Seren Roberts Contest Name: Life is like a Maypole Placed 1st

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Date: 2/17/2015 12:43:00 PM
Metaphorically speaking this is such a beautiful write, Olive_eloi. Love how you look at the pole and the ribbons, and your colours come to life. Congrats on a deserved top win!! hugs // paul
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:03:00 PM
thanks much Paul.. :) I appreciate you stopping by as I have been away for sometime.. :)!
Date: 2/16/2015 5:59:00 PM
Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:06:00 PM
thanks much Skat.. :)!
Date: 2/16/2015 3:23:00 PM
Sweet thoughts of harmony!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:07:00 PM
thanks much Debbie.. :) God bless you always.. :)!
Date: 2/16/2015 11:45:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:08:00 PM
thanks much Jan.. I appreciate you dropping by.. :) hugs too :) GBU
Date: 2/16/2015 9:42:00 AM
congratulations and many thanks for your winning entry to my contest ....Seren
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:09:00 PM
thanks much Seren.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :)!
Date: 2/16/2015 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Olive. Indeed a wonderful poem and very deserving. Congrats Hugs Janet
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:11:00 PM
thanks much Janet.. I appreciate you stopping by.. :)!
Date: 2/5/2015 6:56:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Olive. I love how you use the colors as metaphors. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandr
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:15:00 PM
thanks much Sandra. :) I appreciate you stopping by.. ;) thanks much
Date: 2/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
very beautifully painted olive love the imaginary used excellent pen
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:00:00 PM
thanks much Liam.. :)) I appreciate your drop by.. you too have an excellent pen.
Date: 2/5/2015 2:17:00 PM
Your poem bursts with colorful imagery. You went all out with this one, Olive. A sure winner.
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:57:00 AM
thanks much Andrea.. :)! weeeeeeeeee I hope Seren will see it a worthy winner. :)!
Date: 2/5/2015 7:42:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem from you dear Olive - Love particular the end: "Living life to the fullest before each setting sun" ..... something we all should think about - I wish you best of luck in contest ! ( a 7 from me ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:56:00 AM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :)! indeed, so each one of us must live our life to the fullest..as if everyday is our last.. :)!
Date: 2/4/2015 1:29:00 PM
LoVe it Olive. It's a clever concept using the Maypole as a theme, and the colours being used the way they have. Good luck in the contest Olive. I'd say your heading to the winners podium, along with Jan's - top marks from me, and a fav, lOvE it :) xx :) James
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:08:00 PM
yes it's the wonders of culture that amazes me and luring me to learn more.. :)! thanks much for making it as your fave! :D!
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:35:00 PM
The wonderful option at our fingertips for learning is the internet. If to find, go seek girl, and ye shall find. I so loved the way you crafted a poem about something that you now know, never existed. It's the wonder of cultures, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:54:00 AM
thanks much James.. :)! I really don't know what a maypole is.. :) hence I just research what it is.. :) and wow I like to witness such and be a part of it.. :)! weeee!
Date: 2/3/2015 4:07:00 PM
beautiful imagery in this colourful write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:53:00 AM
thanks much Jan... :) weeee! hugs and hugs too.. :)!
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