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Life Is Amusing

I went on a Ferris wheel that was named The Mountain Top, it took me high, so high Felt like I became a spirit in the sky Then when it let me down so gently, I whistled out a relieved sigh; then laughed and shouted aloud, nothing scares me I went on a roller coaster ride that was called The Demon Drop, it took me up and down so fast Felt like I was a spirit being down cast Then when it came to a slow stop, I involuntarily issued a relieved groan; then cried and shouted aloud, I hope somebody has a mop Life is so fascinating in every way, you never know what's in store for you each day Life can be like a carousel ride, going in circles will take away all your pride

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Date: 11/26/2016 5:49:00 PM
The part about hoping somebody has a mop is classic Freddie! Funny stuff my friend!:)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/26/2016 10:33:00 PM
Ty, Cheryl. I was jut channeling my inner "Cheryl." You're the best at making humorous poem, dear friend. Just trying to make you laugh like you make all of us here at the Soup laugh. Glad you enjoyed it, dear. Love always.
Date: 11/26/2016 8:24:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I enjoyed the metaphors you used to express how "life" can be so amuzing. I agree life is amusing, so it's best that we make the most of it by living it to the fullest. Well done. :-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/26/2016 10:30:00 PM
Ty, Alexis. I used the amusement park as the metaphor setting for the title, "Life is Amusing." Appreciate your love and support, lady. Love and joy to you always.
Date: 11/26/2016 7:55:00 AM
Great one Freddie! :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/26/2016 8:02:00 AM
Ty Heidi. I got a tickle from writing it myself. Love you, dear.
Date: 11/26/2016 6:44:00 AM
You're a cracker RW! It's me Rick, just got my good friend Brendan on the soup so watch out for him. Another Aussie in the mix! Haha. I love your style my friend, keep em coming. /|\
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/26/2016 8:04:00 AM
Ty Brendan and Rick. I sure will keep 'em coming. Love you mates.

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