Life Is a Journey

 
Why do sad tears come to me at night? Life is a journey, is that my beloved in the light? Life is a journey. Oh, turn back the pages of the tangled path I have lived, from a small girl it has been a fight! Life is a journey. In dreams I see the beautiful faces of the long dead, I should be scared as it is a fright! Life is a journey. Come, my ghosts whisper soft to me, your lips we want to kiss, when I try to hold them- they take flight! Life is a journey. Down a long winding road I bring red roses for the dead, and that evening, I will sadly write! Life is a journey. I am heartbroken but I can still fly and soar up high, I can go to an amazing height! Life is a journey. _______________________ March 16, 2016 Poetry/Ghazal/Life is a Journey Copyright Protected, ID 16-768-983-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Your Best Rhyming Poem sponsor, John Hamilton Eighth Place ____________________________ Entered in the contest, Give Me A Ghazal Sponsor, Timothy Hicks Honorable Mention
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Date: 1/7/2020 2:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful ghazal today.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/9/2020 12:26:00 AM
always...
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Constance La France
Date: 1/7/2020 12:28:00 PM
Pashang thanks for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 4/16/2017 8:11:00 PM
I really like the soaring part. The really neat thing about it is that we can look at a lot of different things at once while we're up there doing that. You are a real heart of gold with wings that will take you higher and higher. If there is a breakthrough there to be had, it will be you that will experience it--of that I am certain. Best wishes to you on this Sunday. For me who is looking to live simply, your words lead to a space filled with imagination and hope.
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Date: 4/16/2017 9:34:00 PM
Duke thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment . Appreciate.
Date: 3/29/2016 5:46:00 PM
Hi Constance, An emotional write as always my friend. A ghazal too touch the heart deeply. Feelings that flow in their sadness. A journey through your words is a journey through beauty Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad. A seven and a fave.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2016 6:49:00 PM
Vlad, thanks for the great comment, the congratulations, the seven and the fave !
Date: 3/28/2016 2:06:00 AM
Great way to go:) life sure is a journey. Keep flying high:) congratulations on your HM
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the lovely comment and the congratulations ~
Date: 3/27/2016 2:18:00 PM
Many congrats Broken Wings - i especially love the way you incorporated your name in the final verse:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 8:31:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the congrats, I thought that little twist with my name was a nice touch !
Date: 3/27/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words... I do all I can to support, broken wings... Luv.Linda
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 12:40:00 PM
Linda, and you do, I appreciate all your comments and contests !
Date: 3/27/2016 9:34:00 AM
You always have amazing writes... Broken Wings... Congratulations on your win. Linda
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:25:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting with the amazing and the congratulations !
Date: 3/27/2016 9:19:00 AM
Hi BW, I read this before and thought I had comment. Sorry, it's a wonderful write, and I agree with Timothy on how you inserted your name. It was very clever.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:49:00 AM
James, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful and clever, two words I adore ~
Date: 3/27/2016 2:09:00 AM
Yes life is a journey! Very well done BW and congrats on HM
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 11:09:00 AM
Brian, thanks for visiting and for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 3/27/2016 12:11:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Broken Wings! Beautifully penned. I thought the way you inserted your name in the final couplet super creative ... I hope you enjoyed trying out the ghazal form :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 11:10:00 AM
Timothy, thanks for a great contest, and for my placement, honored ~
Date: 3/26/2016 11:31:00 PM
Very nice... "I am called broken but I can still fly and soar up high, these wings can go to amazing heights"... This line just touched my heart...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 11:16:00 AM
Prat, thanks for visiting my poem, and for the nice comment, oh yes, I am shattered, my past a field of sadness yet on broken wings I still manage to fly ~
Date: 3/18/2016 7:27:00 PM
Life is a journey indeed. Very nice
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/4/2016 10:19:00 PM
You're so talented.....
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2016 8:01:00 PM
Pash, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Date: 3/18/2016 9:42:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..Grief for one so close changes us for life..Good to know that we can join another in heaven..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2016 11:03:00 AM
Sara, thanks for visiting with the nice comment, appreciate !
Date: 3/17/2016 7:09:00 PM
Honestly , Constance, one of the BEST of this form I have seen. Wow, amazing job!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 9:14:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with wow and amazing !
Date: 3/17/2016 3:16:00 PM
Very nice!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 5:50:00 PM
Tom, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
Date: 3/16/2016 7:55:00 PM
Fantastic write dear!!! I loved it...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 2:13:00 AM
Anand, thanks for visiting with the fantastic and the love !
Date: 3/16/2016 7:50:00 PM
Sad and beautiful Constance. Good Luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 2:43:00 AM
Tim, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 3/16/2016 7:34:00 PM
Very well done B/W. Where do you find the art thar so perfectly matches your poems? Do you paint as well? GL in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 2:50:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for the compliment, for the art I do a lot of research, if I cannot find a matching pic to the poem, I use none, I am not an artist but love art, going to the art gallery is an all day beautiful journey, and I am starting to do photography, I just need to figure out this new camera ~
Date: 3/16/2016 6:27:00 PM
Well written and a what beautiful journey it is! good luck, BW in the contest. Peace my friend:)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 2:51:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for the compliment and the beautiful, appreciate !
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