Life In the Slow Lane

Life in the Slow Lane

By Elton Camp

If you live past sixty, things slow down
So that it takes a lot longer to get around

And another thing that you will find, too
In turning out work fast, you are through

Instead of speeding when you drive 
You will slow down just to stay alive

Working in the yard no longer is play
Just trimming the roses can take all day

Off your tongue, words don’t glibly slide
That you’ve forgotten names, must hide

But the thing that’s speeded up is that 
Cake is quicker to make your belly fat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Each one of your couplets unfortunately conveys the plain truth. They are all written well with appropriate rhyming. Good job Elton.
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February 8, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Robert, thanks. It is written from personal experience. I am 71. Elton
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