Life Cycle

seeds sown in the ground grow to flowers that astound and end dried and browned

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Patrick Cornwall

Date: 4/27/2012 6:40:00 AM

congrats on feature and nice poem...Patrick

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 4/26/2012 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/24/2012 6:58:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your haiku being featured.

Daver Austin

Date: 4/23/2012 2:34:00 PM

That be nature, Jack. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 7:54:00 AM

Very nice Haiku here,jack!Congrats on your 1st place win!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:15:00 AM

Hey man, a pleasure to see you at the top with this worthy first place, Jack. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:15:00 AM

Jack, you not only describe the life cycle of the flowers, but the cycle of life and death in all creatures. Beautifull written. Congratulations on your top win! Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 8:54:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Jack. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Jack. Thank you for supporting my contest and my decision to run my contest my way. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 7:58:00 PM

Congrats Jack on a big win...you nailed the cycle...BG

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 4:58:00 PM

Cool Haiku poem Jack. Congratulations to you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:18:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your first place win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy your top spot ..for a top notch poem..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 2:03:00 PM

But come alive again. Great writing and wonderful win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 1:55:00 PM

though just one, it's SUPERB! Congrats for your big number ONE

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 7:56:00 AM

Sweet life cycle poem. Was it for the contest?

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/3/2011 3:50:00 PM

sad but true