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humble observer as the world spins around me i step in and out to readjust my focus it’s a fine balance as i walk the tightrope of sanity i hold on preciously to the delicate flower that is hope keeping my eye on the finish line AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on March 11, 2021 for contest LIFE AT A GLANCE sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE ROSE - RANKED 9TH

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Date: 3/14/2021 5:06:00 PM
Very nice perspective about our perceptions of sanity. I like: as the world/spins/around me
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2021 6:06:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated ~
Date: 3/12/2021 7:43:00 PM
Maintaining your balance may indeed be an important (one of the most important?) aspects of a life. Your poem is finely finished and a cogent and useful instructive comment for all of us. Good work.
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Date: 3/12/2021 8:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Leo ~
Date: 3/12/2021 6:08:00 PM
Perfect poem for what so many of us are feeling! Congrats!
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Jennifer ~
Date: 3/12/2021 12:55:00 PM
Love the picture. “ The delicate flower that is hope.“
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:27:00 PM
Much appreciated, Kim ~
Date: 3/12/2021 11:33:00 AM
Line your poetic talent shines through each and every word. Congratulations on your placement in this premier contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ann. You're too kind ~
Date: 3/12/2021 8:56:00 AM
This is one perfect write! Simply amazing that I don't have any words to express my feelings. :)
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:27:00 PM
Thanks, Kaveesha. Much appreciated ~
Date: 3/12/2021 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You are so creative. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula ~
Date: 3/12/2021 7:43:00 AM
Line, wonderful Free Verse poem and congratulations on your win in the Life At A Glance contest, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thanks, Constance ~ much appreciated
Date: 3/12/2021 7:36:00 AM
You are a great observer of human nature Line, thank you for joining and congrats on your win : )
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely inspiration ~
Date: 3/11/2021 9:15:00 PM
Nice work, interestingly presented in four stanzas, each of which can stand alone. I liked this approach. Good luck in Mystic's contest.
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Milton. Most appreciated ~

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