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Life At a Glance

Enamored, I sit, in mystique of space and time Glancing at intricacies of ebullience sublime Contemplating mystery of universe all alone Through echoes of destiny, heard and known, Where birds roam, prairies bloom, oceans flow, And lauding its miracles tranquil seasons glow Enchanting passions of life, intimately I know. Life at a glance is a bouquet of fresh flowers, Exuberant pitter-patter of April rain showers, Valleys and hills gracing resplendent meadows, Sometimes sun-lit, sometimes in shadows, Invigorating senses in fragrance of budding rose Life is a bond of love that blossoms and grows-- A melody, a rhythm, a song every heart knows. Alas, the happy vibes reside, tailing teary eyes, For every smile somewhere, someone cries, Dark clouds often daub expanse of blue skies, Dense fogs precede beauteous morning rise, And every celebration of success victory calls, Someone on a steep-climb stumbles and falls. Yet, hope of a new dawn always pierces dark And replaces wolf-howls with sweet songs of lark, So, I let mornings rise on ebullience of blue skies Enamored in space, time, letting life actualize. March 9, 2021 Poem of the week on March 14, 2021 Placed 4th: Life at a glance premium contest

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Date: 2/15/2022 2:05:00 PM
Hi Vijay, such a lot of reflection in this piece Many of us can find parts here that we have Lived and recall, no doubt or have seen others Live, and I notice poem Of the week.' kudos My friend.'
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Date: 2/15/2022 8:13:00 AM
Life at a glance is one of joy and sorrow, where sorrow often predominates."Yet, hope of a new dawn always pierces dark And replaces wolf-howls with sweet songs of lark". How beautifully you have projected hope amid all gloom.... ! Lovely composition with so much of positive vibes !
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Date: 3/29/2021 7:38:00 AM
Somehow I missed this outstanding poem Vijay. I have read it a few times now. It is beautiful and a FAV for me. Congratulations for writing this winner :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 3/28/2021 6:29:00 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 3/28/2021 12:50:00 AM
Love your last line Vijay my friend, 'Enamored in space, time, letting life actualize'. Congratulations on POTD. I have been mostly off soup for about three weeks so so a great deal to catch up on. Elias went for a serious major op, I wasn't allowed to visit him, and was an emotional wreck. Blessings and hugs, Vijay, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate. Glad your husband is doing well now. Blessings.
Date: 3/24/2021 3:52:00 PM
I see this took more than one honor. Triple congrats, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2021 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 3/18/2021 4:49:00 PM
Sorry my friend, I have just now found this excellent POTD and POTW you have given us! And a well deserved recognition and honor received. Certainly a magnificent piece and one that so clearly reveals the knowledge and creativity of a a true master poet, imho. A fine fav, a bright gem - God bless....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/19/2021 10:44:00 AM
Glad you stopped by with your wonderful comments, Robert. Much appreciate. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 3/17/2021 1:50:00 PM
Beautifully written and wonderful expression. Well done Vijay. Worthy of POTD God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Date: 3/17/2021 10:55:00 AM
The recognition you have received for this excellent piece is well deserved. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/17/2021 10:22:00 AM
This is delightful Vijay! Congrats on POTD and POTW!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2021 10:34:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Jennifer.
Date: 3/17/2021 10:21:00 AM
You're on a roll...Congratulations Vijay Pandit on POTW...Well done.
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Date: 3/17/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 3/16/2021 7:56:00 PM
An outstanding piece of writing, Vijay. You certainly deserved this recognition. Congratulations on POTW!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Milton. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/16/2021 6:22:00 AM
WOW!! You are the star of the week my friend and truly deserves it with this magnificent piece. HUGE congrats, my friend... :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2021 6:50:00 AM
So very kind of you, as always, my friend. Glad to read your cheerful feedback. Many thanks, Akkina.
Date: 3/15/2021 8:29:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your poem receiving the deserving POEM OF THE WEEK honor _Constance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Constance. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/14/2021 9:17:00 PM
Vijay, this is an absolutely beautiful poem filled with outstanding imagery. Congratulations on your win and having this wonderful poem honored with Poem of the week! I have saved it to my faves. I really love it my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:09:00 AM
Such a special treat to receive a FAVE from you my friend. I am honored by your kind remarks. Many thanks, Connie. Hope time is slowly healing the pain. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 3/14/2021 6:23:00 PM
Welcome to the spotlight, my dear friend. Your words deserve to be here. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:08:00 AM
Always a delight when you visit. Much appreciate my dear friend. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2021 6:06:00 PM
Much congrats, Vijay, on your POTW!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Milton. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/14/2021 3:39:00 PM
Heya Vijay congratulations on your potw, wonderful writing from the soul, cheers David
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:06:00 AM
Glad you visited David with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2021 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations! Excellent write! The second stanza says all - beautiful expression ~ Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:05:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mala. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2021 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on potw!! Well done
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Mark. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/14/2021 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on your double honour, Vijay! An amazing write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:04:00 AM
Glad you visited, US, with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2021 8:12:00 AM
WOW!!! I am back to say......... Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful winner. Have a blessed day/week............................
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:03:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Paula. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2021 8:02:00 AM
Way to go Vijay! A well deserved honour. ‘;0)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Date: 3/14/2021 7:31:00 AM
The poem is magnificent Vijay, congratulations on poem of the week, so deserved ~ Belle
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Belle for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/14/2021 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW, gorgeous imagery in this gem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 6:02:00 AM
Glad you visited with your lovely feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks, Tania.
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