Life At a Glance

Enamored, I sit, in mystique of space and time
Glancing at intricacies of ebullience sublime
Contemplating mystery of universe all alone
Through echoes of destiny, heard and known,
Where birds roam, prairies bloom, oceans flow,
And lauding its miracles tranquil seasons glow
Enchanting passions of life, intimately I know.

Life at a glance is a bouquet of fresh flowers,
Exuberant pitter-patter of April rain showers,
Valleys and hills gracing resplendent meadows,
Sometimes sun-lit, sometimes in shadows,
Invigorating senses in fragrance of budding rose
Life is a bond of love that blossoms and grows--
A melody, a rhythm, a song every heart knows.

Alas, the happy vibes reside, tailing teary eyes,
For every smile somewhere, someone cries,
Dark clouds often daub expanse of blue skies,
Dense fogs precede beauteous morning rise,
And every celebration of success victory calls,
Someone on a steep-climb stumbles and falls.

Yet, hope of a new dawn always pierces dark
And replaces wolf-howls with sweet songs of lark,
So, I let mornings rise on ebullience of blue skies
Enamored in space, time, letting life actualize.

March 9, 2021
Poem of the week on March 14, 2021
Placed 4th: Life at a glance premium contest
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Maverick Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 2:05 PM
Hi Vijay, such a lot of reflection in this piece Many of us can find parts here that we have Lived and recall, no doubt or have seen others Live, and I notice poem Of the week.' kudos My friend.'
George Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Life at a glance is one of joy and sorrow, where sorrow often predominates."Yet, hope of a new dawn always pierces dark And replaces wolf-howls with sweet songs of lark". How beautifully you have projected hope amid all gloom.... ! Lovely composition with so much of positive vibes !
Sands Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Somehow I missed this outstanding poem Vijay. I have read it a few times now. It is beautiful and a FAV for me. Congratulations for writing this winner :)
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate. A special thank you for the FAVE.
May Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 6:29 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read..
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 12:50 AM
Love your last line Vijay my friend, 'Enamored in space, time, letting life actualize'. Congratulations on POTD. I have been mostly off soup for about three weeks so so a great deal to catch up on. Elias went for a serious major op, I wasn't allowed to visit him, and was an emotional wreck. Blessings and hugs, Vijay, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate. Glad your husband is doing well now. Blessings.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:52 PM
I see this took more than one honor. Triple congrats, Vijay
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Lindley Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:49 PM
Sorry my friend, I have just now found this excellent POTD and POTW you have given us! And a well deserved recognition and honor received. Certainly a magnificent piece and one that so clearly reveals the knowledge and creativity of a a true master poet, imho. A fine fav, a bright gem - God bless....
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Glad you stopped by with your wonderful comments, Robert. Much appreciate. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Ball Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Beautifully written and wonderful expression. Well done Vijay. Worthy of POTD God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Pettit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:55 AM
The recognition you have received for this excellent piece is well deserved. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Thank you Robert. Appreciate your visit and comments.
Fenn Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:22 AM
This is delightful Vijay! Congrats on POTD and POTW!
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Jennifer.
Michael Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:21 AM
You're on a roll...Congratulations Vijay Pandit on POTW...Well done.
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:56 PM
An outstanding piece of writing, Vijay. You certainly deserved this recognition. Congratulations on POTW!
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Milton. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Downing  Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:22 AM
WOW!! You are the star of the week my friend and truly deserves it with this magnificent piece. HUGE congrats, my friend... :)
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:50 AM
So very kind of you, as always, my friend. Glad to read your cheerful feedback. Many thanks, Akkina.
La France Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your poem receiving the deserving POEM OF THE WEEK honor _Constance
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Constance. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 9:17 PM
Vijay, this is an absolutely beautiful poem filled with outstanding imagery. Congratulations on your win and having this wonderful poem honored with Poem of the week! I have saved it to my faves. I really love it my friend. Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Such a special treat to receive a FAVE from you my friend. I am honored by your kind remarks. Many thanks, Connie. Hope time is slowly healing the pain. Hope you are doing well.
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Welcome to the spotlight, my dear friend. Your words deserve to be here. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Always a delight when you visit. Much appreciate my dear friend. Many thanks.
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Much congrats, Vijay, on your POTW!
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Milton. Much appreciate.
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March 14, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Heya Vijay congratulations on your potw, wonderful writing from the soul, cheers David
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Glad you visited David with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations! Excellent write! The second stanza says all - beautiful expression ~ Mala
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mala. Many thanks.
Koplin Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on potw!! Well done
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Thank you Mark. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Seeker Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Congrats on your double honour, Vijay! An amazing write!
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Glad you visited, US, with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 8:12 AM
WOW!!! I am back to say......... Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful winner. Have a blessed day/week............................
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Paula. Many thanks.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Way to go Vijay! A well deserved honour. ‘;0)
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 7:31 AM
The poem is magnificent Vijay, congratulations on poem of the week, so deserved ~ Belle
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Belle for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Kitchin Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on POTW, gorgeous imagery in this gem!
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Glad you visited with your lovely feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks, Tania.
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