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Life as Seen By a Caterpillar

A simple green life Thank goodness I don't wear shoes Soon I'll be air-borne Sorry, not a traditional haiku, but I couldnt resist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 12:47:00 PM
Koolio Haiku Barbara, it made me chuckle. May i say thank you so much for all your past comments. They are all very much appreciated. I wish you all the very best to you and your future writing endeavours >> James,xx
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:09:00 PM
Weeeeeeeeee!!!! I'm blown in the wind and it's rainning shoes because, unlike you, I'm wearing mine. Weeeeeeeee!!!! :)
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Date: 4/27/2010 5:20:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this! Have to take some liberties now and then. I enjoyed it! Karen
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:45:00 PM
This did make me chuckle...so clever !!
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Date: 4/27/2010 2:19:00 PM
Great interpertation of the picture...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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