Life As Seen By a Caterpillar

A simple green life

Thank goodness I don't wear shoes

Soon I'll be air-borne



Sorry, not a traditional haiku,
but I couldnt resist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 28, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Koolio Haiku Barbara, it made me chuckle. May i say thank you so much for all your past comments. They are all very much appreciated. I wish you all the very best to you and your future writing endeavours >> James,xx
Scripca Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Weeeeeeeeee!!!! I'm blown in the wind and it's rainning shoes because, unlike you, I'm wearing mine. Weeeeeeeee!!!! :)
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April 27, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Got a chuckle out of this! Have to take some liberties now and then. I enjoyed it! Karen
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:45 PM
This did make me chuckle...so clever !!
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April 27, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Great interpertation of the picture...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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