Life

There sat an old man on the 
porch. He was long and gray. 
Skin that looked similar to a 
dried raisin. Dark as a wet 
pecan. His eyes a light green 
color. You know his dad was 
one of those Creoles. How did 
his skin get so dark? Working 
out there in that field for that 
white man, they say. Worked 
there so long his back and 
knees gave out one day while 
he was tilling the land. He sat 
still on the wooden chair in the 
shade of the sloping roof of his 
shack. His wavy gray hair wet 
with sweat around the sides of 
his head and on his bony chest. 
He had lost the interest in 
keeping it groomed so the 
waves had lost their shiny 
luster. The wrinkles pooled 
around his eyes and sunk in his 
cheeks. They told him that he 
had gotten that from his 
grandmama's white side 
because his ***** grandmama 
on his daddy's side died at the 
age of 80 without a wrinkle. He 
had always resented his white 
side and the more he loathed 
them the heavier his heart 
became. The heavier his heart 
became the deeper the wrinkles 
became. So this hatred was the 
cycle of his life. His large hands 
spread out dangling at his side. 
Not swinging, just dangling as 
if they had steel poles in them. 
They looked so heavy attached 
to his little arms. The veins 
shown blue through his wrists 
at the base of his hands. More 
privileges and favor with his 
father's people because of that. 
He wore no shirt. Only khaki 
slacks that looked as old as he 
did. He wore no shoes so his 
long feet rested on the creaky 
boards of the porch. He sat 
with his eyes staring out at 
nothing. The children played in 
the yard. Screaming and 
running around with laughter. 
Their mothers just across the 
street talking and gossiping 
about the young women at the 
street corner. Envy in their 
voices as they discussed and 
threw out their opinions. The 
men gathered around the 
mailbox tossing and dice and 
yelling out profanity to each 
other. Everyone going about 
their daily lives. The old man 
still sat motionless as a 
painting. Look closely. His chest 
is not moving. There is no 
breath blowing out of his nose. 
He had become a corpse right 
where he sat. And so we see 
the cycle of life. Laughter. 
Gossip. Lust. Envy. Innocence. 
Play. Youth. Sin. Life. And 
death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/11/2014 9:40:00 AM
Another beautiful write of yours. I love this one here...This sounds as if you described a town in Louisiana...I live in Texas so it sounds familiar. "Creole" I like the imagery and the flow. You are very gifted in your craft!
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