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The Life Acrostic Contest sponsored by Matt Caliri

Placed 8th out of 61 entries.

LIFE

Longlasting or short could come at a price
Indulging in odds when rolling the dice.
Fulfillment depends on living a dream
Enlisted to share in heavenly scheme.

journeylifeacrostic

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2024 3:39:00 PM

Wow 8th out of 61. Totally awesome. Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/1/2024 12:39:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Judging 61 poems is no joke. I judge contests on a Japanese haiku site and it can be quite a headache when there are about 150 entries (I also have to analyse some of the winning ones). ~ Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/11/2024 12:36:00 PM

Hi Paul life is something that we are brought up to understand, that we should live within the norms of society and engage in whatever faith we believe in, no matter how inviting a suggestion, a temptaton or an offer sounds, call in your faith at this moment and think and believe of humanity's heavenly scheme. Wonderful entry and a deserved win, Congratulations Paul my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/1/2024 12:43:00 AM

Thank you, Jenny for contributing with your positive and meaningful feedback. The congrats are also appreciated. ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2024 7:00:00 PM

Dear Paul, life is filled with up and down moments, with many obstacles to overcome. Taking it one day at time, is the best way to live. This is beautiful and tender, and it holds so many different emotions within. Your thoughts curl gently around me and my heart. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 7/27/2024 1:26:00 PM

Thank for your lovely feedback, dear Brandy, and pls excuse the late reply, but life has been hectic & more, and catching up is a hard game to play lol :) Warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2024 6:50:00 AM

So much said here in just four lines - love this, my friend. Hope all's well for you in sunny Malta

Paul Callus
Date: 7/13/2024 12:46:00 AM

Thank you Jack. Apart from some minor hiccups, life is not bad; at present sunny Malta is too hot for my liking!! Best regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/2/2024 8:12:00 AM

Dear Paul, your lovely rhythm and rhyme acrostic captures the essence of living with poetic finesse. Your verse encompasses both the physical and spiritual aspects of mortal life's free will, dreams and gambles as part of a "heavenly scheme." You sum up "Life" with beautiful insight and brevity. Congratulations for your win in Matt's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs ,my dear friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/13/2024 12:50:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback which is always generously given, dear Susan. I hope that you will receive this reply since up to a few days ago I was unable to do so because of some glitch. Fingers crossed :) Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2024 2:55:00 PM

Written with much thought of how and what happens to us during our lifetime. Much wisdom in your words. Huge congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer .

Paul Callus
Date: 5/30/2024 12:03:00 AM

Thank you dear Jenny. I'm trying to get back into the groove after some hiccups in life. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Warm regards & hugs // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2024 8:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2024 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Kim...and once again applause for placing 1st!! // paul

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/21/2024 1:34:00 PM

Love your "indulging in odds" Paul. Nice acrostic. Congratulations! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/21/2024 2:48:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Linda...thank you. I already read your winning poem that goes by the same name...well done!! ~ Regards // paul

Matt Caliri

Date: 5/20/2024 9:03:00 PM

I love this thoughtful little piece. So much pathos in terse little statements, and loved the last line, "heavenly scheme." Congrats on 8th place out of 61 entries! This was outstanding.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/21/2024 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Matt; the placement and accompanying comments are much appreciated. ~ Best regards // paul

Tonye George

Date: 5/4/2024 5:44:00 AM

Lovely acoustic Paul, great write.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2024 6:57:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Tonye. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/2/2024 6:20:00 PM

I agree Paul. Life is what you make it. This one and the next one. Great to read your words of wisdom my friend. I hope you're living your dream and all is well with you and yours.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Danny. Life is not too bad, although since our paths last crossed I had some health issues which are now more or less resolved. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/2/2024 8:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Life" Acrostic write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away................

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2024 10:10:00 AM

Pleased that you read and enjoyed my humble offering, Paula...thank you and blessings. // paul

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/2/2024 6:14:00 AM

Hello Paul, your acrostic poem beautifully encapsulates the essence of life's journey. I love how each line reflects on the unpredictable nature of existence, our choices, and the pursuit of fulfillment. Well done and good luck in the contest! - Blessings, Daniel

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2024 10:09:00 AM

Thank you for the awesome, insightful feedback, Daniel....much appreciated. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/1/2024 11:21:00 PM

Great write! Loved that third line the most. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2024 1:34:00 AM

Thank you and good morning, Eileen. It's not easy to talk about life in just 4 lines, but I did my best :) Regards // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/30/2024 5:31:00 AM

Hello Paul. Good Morning. Contest or no contest this entry stands on its own and you did wonderfully with the acrositc format with flow and coherence. You stated much and truth as well concerning life. Best wishes within the contest. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Blessings always. I will return again soon. (smile)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2024 9:39:00 AM

Your complimentary and encouraging words are a delight to read, Lisa...thank you for a lovely visit! Regards & Blessings, my friend // paul

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