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The Life Acrostic Contest sponsored by Matt Caliri

 

Longlasting or short could come at a price Indulging in odds when rolling the dice. Fulfillment depends on living a dream Enlisted to share in heavenly scheme.

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Date: 5/4/2024 5:44:00 AM
Lovely acoustic Paul, great write.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2024 6:57:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Tonye. Have a nice weekend. // paul
Date: 5/2/2024 6:20:00 PM
I agree Paul. Life is what you make it. This one and the next one. Great to read your words of wisdom my friend. I hope you're living your dream and all is well with you and yours.
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Date: 5/3/2024 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Danny. Life is not too bad, although since our paths last crossed I had some health issues which are now more or less resolved. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 5/2/2024 8:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Life" Acrostic write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 5/3/2024 10:10:00 AM
Pleased that you read and enjoyed my humble offering, Paula...thank you and blessings. // paul
Date: 5/2/2024 6:14:00 AM
Hello Paul, your acrostic poem beautifully encapsulates the essence of life's journey. I love how each line reflects on the unpredictable nature of existence, our choices, and the pursuit of fulfillment. Well done and good luck in the contest! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/3/2024 10:09:00 AM
Thank you for the awesome, insightful feedback, Daniel....much appreciated. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul
Date: 5/1/2024 11:21:00 PM
Great write! Loved that third line the most. Good luck in the contest.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2024 1:34:00 AM
Thank you and good morning, Eileen. It's not easy to talk about life in just 4 lines, but I did my best :) Regards // paul
Date: 4/30/2024 5:31:00 AM
Hello Paul. Good Morning. Contest or no contest this entry stands on its own and you did wonderfully with the acrositc format with flow and coherence. You stated much and truth as well concerning life. Best wishes within the contest. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Blessings always. I will return again soon. (smile)
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2024 9:39:00 AM
Your complimentary and encouraging words are a delight to read, Lisa...thank you for a lovely visit! Regards & Blessings, my friend // paul

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