LIFE

Life with it's ups and down's
I love you day and night
Family and friends make
Every moment extra special

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/3/2024 5:08:00 PM

When family members pass, things can never be the same; they change and sometimes improve, sometimes degrade, but they are what makes life worthwhile. I like this, Paula, but you don't really need the ' in downs, if you like it put one in ups too.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2024 10:50:00 AM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Life is always changing. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2024 10:19:00 AM

I had to come read your entry, Paula, after you indirectly alerted me to it! It's short and sweet and positive. True, family and friends leave a big impact on our life! ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/3/2024 12:56:00 PM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. It is a short one but I enjoyed writing it. Yes, family/friends leave a big impact on our life ... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Valsa George

Date: 4/27/2024 9:12:00 PM

Very sweet! Family and friends make life meaningful and joyful. Love this miniscule of a poem, dear Paula. All the Best!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2024 9:50:00 AM

Great to see you. Thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be Very sweet. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2024 9:44:00 AM

A worthy poem with a message. Very nice Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2024 9:46:00 AM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write with a message. I enjoyed writing this short one... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2024 12:15:00 PM

And this is a special poem! Very nice. I enjoyed.. i hope you have a great day :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2024 9:21:00 AM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. It is short but was fun to write... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Ink Empress

Date: 4/22/2024 11:36:00 PM

Family and friends, one who receive the love and light from them are blessed, so are you sweet Paula, your depiction of life is profound and soul warming! Pleasure reading this, best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2024 12:34:00 PM

Great to see you. Thanks for your best wishes. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be profound/soul warming. Your words are so kind... It was a fun to write. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/21/2024 8:06:00 AM

Beautiful Acrostic, Dear Paula. Family and friends - most important part of our life - you have said it so well, Dear Paula ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:40:00 AM

Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a Beautiful Acrostic. Yes, Family/true friends are very important in our life. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/21/2024 4:02:00 AM

Now that is very heart warming to read!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:38:00 AM

Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be very heart warming to read... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Len Gasun

Date: 4/20/2024 4:32:00 PM

Cute and gorgeous acrostic poem of life my dearest poet friend Paula. I strongly agree with you that Family and friends make our life extra special no matter what happens. I immensely enjoying your wonderful acrostic. Thank you so much for sharing. Wishing you all the best my dearest poet friend. Sorry for being late but I'll try to catch up soon. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:36:00 AM

Great to see you. You are never late. Sometimes we are just busy with life. I took the weekend off from Soup. Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a Cute/gorgeous acrostic poem. Your words are very kind. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2024 3:19:00 PM

Wonderful, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:31:00 AM

Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be Wonderful... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/20/2024 7:09:00 AM

- Just lovely, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:30:00 AM

Great to see you and for your good luck. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be Just lovely. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/19/2024 12:40:00 PM

Stunning Acrostic yours my dear Paula. You don't need too many words to express what it is really important, you really did it well. I wish you very Good Luck in the contest! Hugs/María

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:29:00 AM

Great to see you and for your good luck. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a Stunning Acrostic. It was fun to write. Sometimes less words can be more. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/19/2024 11:13:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes a poem of few words that says it all. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 11:43:00 AM

Hello Paula, I enjoyed this poem. I hope you had a good weekend off. Yes sometimes less words can be more. Hugs. D/arlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/22/2024 11:26:00 AM

Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Yes, sometimes less words can be more. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/19/2024 10:37:00 AM

A nice brief poem that says so much. Well done. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2024 12:32:00 PM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" write. Yes, this one was a brief Acrostic write. It was fun to write.... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Terry Miller

Date: 4/19/2024 9:01:00 AM

Brief and beautiful, a fantastic entry for the contest GL

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/19/2024 9:33:00 AM

Great to see you. Thanks for your GL. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be Brief and beautiful, a fantastic entry. It was a fun to write. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/19/2024 4:57:00 AM

Dear Paula, your poem beautifully captures life's essence—the interplay of love, family, and friendship amidst its ups and downs. I loved that it is cherishing every moment as the key to finding blessings in life's journey. - Blessings, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/19/2024 9:32:00 AM

Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Yes, finding blessings in life's journey is a joy. Enjoy your day writing away...............