LIFE

Life with it's ups and down's
I love you day and night
Family and friends make
Every moment extra special
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Poteet Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 5:08 PM
When family members pass, things can never be the same; they change and sometimes improve, sometimes degrade, but they are what makes life worthwhile. I like this, Paula, but you don't really need the ' in downs, if you like it put one in ups too.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Life is always changing. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:19 AM
I had to come read your entry, Paula, after you indirectly alerted me to it! It's short and sweet and positive. True, family and friends leave a big impact on our life! ~ Regards // paul
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. It is a short one but I enjoyed writing it. Yes, family/friends leave a big impact on our life ... Enjoy your day writing away...............
George Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Very sweet! Family and friends make life meaningful and joyful. Love this miniscule of a poem, dear Paula. All the Best!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be Very sweet. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 9:44 AM
A worthy poem with a message. Very nice Paula! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write with a message. I enjoyed writing this short one... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 12:15 PM
And this is a special poem! Very nice. I enjoyed.. i hope you have a great day :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. It is short but was fun to write... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Empress Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:36 PM
Family and friends, one who receive the love and light from them are blessed, so are you sweet Paula, your depiction of life is profound and soul warming! Pleasure reading this, best wishes for the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:34 PM
Great to see you. Thanks for your best wishes. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be profound/soul warming. Your words are so kind... It was a fun to write. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful Acrostic, Dear Paula. Family and friends - most important part of our life - you have said it so well, Dear Paula ~
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:40 AM
Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a  Beautiful Acrostic. Yes, Family/true friends are very important in our life. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Vaso Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 4:02 AM
Now that is very heart warming to read!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:38 AM
Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be very heart warming to read... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Gasun Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Cute and gorgeous acrostic poem of life my dearest poet friend Paula. I strongly agree with you that Family and friends make our life extra special no matter what happens. I immensely enjoying your wonderful acrostic. Thank you so much for sharing. Wishing you all the best my dearest poet friend. Sorry for being late but I'll try to catch up soon. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Great to see you. You are never late. Sometimes we are just busy with life. I took the weekend off from Soup. Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a Cute/gorgeous acrostic poem. Your words are very kind. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Wonderful, Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be Wonderful... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 7:09 AM
- Just lovely, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Great to see you and for your good luck. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be Just lovely. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Stunning Acrostic yours my dear Paula. You don't need too many words to express what it is really important, you really did it well. I wish you very Good Luck in the contest! Hugs/María
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Great to see you and for your good luck. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you found my "LIFE" write to be a Stunning Acrostic. It was fun to write. Sometimes less words can be more. Enjoy your day writing away...............
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Hello Paula, yes a poem of few words that says it all. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Hello Paula, I enjoyed this poem. I hope you had a good weekend off. Yes sometimes less words can be more. Hugs. D/arlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Great to see you. I took the weekend off from Soup.... Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Yes, sometimes less words can be more. Hugs... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Babcock Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 10:37 AM
A nice brief poem that says so much. Well done. love phyl
Goldsmith Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" write. Yes, this one was a brief Acrostic write. It was fun to write.... Enjoy your day writing away...............
Miller Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Brief and beautiful, a fantastic entry for the contest GL
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your GL. Glad you found my "LIFE" Acrostic write to be Brief and beautiful, a fantastic entry. It was a fun to write. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Rodgers Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Dear Paula, your poem beautifully captures life's essence—the interplay of love, family, and friendship amidst its ups and downs. I loved that it is cherishing every moment as the key to finding blessings in life's journey. - Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. Yes, finding blessings in life's journey is a joy. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Romios Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 3:51 PM
What a great picture of life in four lines! Pangie xx
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" Acrostic write. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Kind sentiments straight from the heart. Yes indeed--family and friends make life special!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "LIFE" write. Yes, family/friends make life special. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Goldsmith Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 12:55 PM
LIFE~Date Written:4/18/2024
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