Life

I was the sunshine that cradled your day 
that tried to push the clouds away 
I was the sand that ran between your toes 
when you were four years old 
that soon became the rain you danced in 
from seven to eleven 
And I watched you grow in the glow 
of a moon that beamed 
when you turned thirteen 
How unfair you thought I'd become 
when you turned twenty-one 
because you lost a few dreams 
But I stayed awake when you were out late 
I was the stars 'till you turned twenty-eight 
And when you found your love 
"the one" 
I was glimmer in the eye, the blue sky, the sun 
Then you turned thirty-one 
I became cloud, thunder and shower 
there weren't enough minutes to put in your hour 
You forgot how to dance in the rain 
'till you turned forty all you did was complain 
Then you took off your shoes 
and went back to the sand 
I was now the warmth of your child's hand 
At forty-three 
you spent more time with me 
You began 
to understand 
And when you stood fifty years old 
you stayed warm to me even though 
at times I was cold 
How close we grew 
when you turned sixty-two 
The breeze was I 
that hung your grandchild's kite in the sky 
And I'm sorry I made you sad 
when I took "the one" away 
But I was proud 
when you pushed aside that cloud 
and cradled 'me' in the sun 
for the remainder of our day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 3, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Gerry. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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October 9, 2009 at 3:13 AM
Gerry, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 26, 2009 at 11:35 AM
PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Gerry, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gerry. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Very touching, dear Gerry. Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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March 11, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Gerry. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 9:55 AM
Congrats Gerry on the featuring of "Life." Vince
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March 9, 2009 at 6:01 PM
Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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March 9, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Very thought-provoking write here, Gerry. Almost a "Personification" form if the voice speaking is the wind ... very moving and great imagery and an excellent choice to be a favorite of the week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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March 9, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Gerry - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 8, 2009 at 9:44 PM
Gerry - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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February 18, 2009 at 8:54 PM
I loved this write Gerry. liked the way it flowed. Very good write.
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January 5, 2009 at 5:33 PM
Gerry this is so wonderful to read. Thank you. Laurie
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