Life-- Eta--Springtime

The warmth of the sun Pitter-Patter of Spring rain Life blooms Abundant

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/13/2012 8:09:00 PM

What a sweet haiku. I love the rain, though I don't get much of it here in the warmth of southern California. This poem allowed me to visualize with much tremendous imagry the beautific atmosphere of springtime--in sound, smell and sight..such insight! Great one. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:24:00 PM

You are really good at these, HG. I adore haiku and senryu, so I will read all the ones I can find on your page 5!

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2009 9:05:00 PM

Good to see you back HG, I missed you on the Soup. Hope you enter this is Carol Brown's Springtime Contest...Raul

Date: 3/3/2009 4:40:00 PM

I can't wait for spring and those blooms! It's cold and windy here in North Dakota. Creative title! Enjoyed this one. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/3/2009 12:32:00 PM

I makes me warm to see you back with us. This is lovely. Barbeeg..BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/3/2009 12:32:00 PM

I makes me warm to see you back with us. This is lovely. Barbeeg..BG

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/3/2009 12:16:00 PM

Beeeeutiful! So wonderful to read your excellent poetry. Gorgeous imagery. Hope you are feeling great! Will email you soon. Big hugs, Shar xoxoxoxo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2009 10:03:00 AM

You capture the welcome sight, sound and feel of spring. Very nice haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn