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July 17, 2023

Contest : Ice Cream Limerick

Sponsored by : Tania Kitchin

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Licking Lips

On a sunny day we sit by a stream, I offer him a cherry cone ice cream. Seeing how melting one drips as supple pink down my lips, he says he’ll lick those instead and I scream.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a great day/week.......................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Thank you very much, Sara for your visit and comment.
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Haha Subminal. Very clever - congratulations! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Kitchin Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
Merryman Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Good one, Subimal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:20 PM
Thank you, Kim.
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