Liberty

I had a lunatic feeling, once, of caging a bird,
I had purchased a very beautifully-looking cage;
I had kept a myna in it and did very well gird,
I saw to it that she felt happy and in joy engage...! 

Was my myna happy? Did I think over any time?
Did she eat whatever I had lovingly thrown at her?
Barley, Brown Rice, Buckwheat, Bulgur, and gave the best of lime,
Did she feel that I saw to the best growth of her fine fur...?

I was self-content that my myna liked me very much,
Who can, yet, tell who likes who and hates who and who kills? 
I've done everything for her, I thought; left nothing as such,
Why should my myna fly away from me and went black hills...?

I, then, understood that my myna wanted liberty,
Which existing being does not love creativity...???
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George Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 9:23 AM
If a bird is shut in a cage, even if the cage is made of gold, it won't be happy inside as it longs for the expanse of the sky. Both men and animals love liberty ! This innate longing for freedom is beautifully illustrated here. Congatulations Chris on your top win.
La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Christuraj, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words !
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 3:52 AM
Congratulations to you too on the win. It's a beautiful poem. Birds as all animals on Earth, need freedom, you are right. Well done....!
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Seeker Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 7:06 PM
A sublime understanding, Chris. Likewise, we too are caged in by fears and desires, rooted in attachment. Enjoyed your thoughtful write, warmest congratulations on your win
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 1:51 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a lovely poem, Alex :) -
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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July 20, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Wonderful poetry Christuraj, every creature on earth is born free, who are we to take away their liberty. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story/ending. Have a wonderful day....................
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:31 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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