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Liar, Liar Pants on Fire

Billy was ten and building a rocket. He claimed no one his age could top it. The day came for the firing But a blunder in the wiring Made it end up in Billy’s pants pocket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2016 7:08:00 AM
LET me LAUGH FIEST... POOR BILLY BOY ! FANTASTIC WRITE... I HOPE BILLY IS STILL ALIVE.... you have the power to engage your readers.... I wilk be reading more... :)
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/27/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Red. I appreciate--more that I can adequately express--your kind words. You have made my day. hugs xxx
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:08:00 AM
100/100
Date: 10/6/2015 11:10:00 PM
Lovely one my friend, bring all the memories up. Beautiful words, keep up the good writing.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/7/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Dalia. I value and appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 9/30/2015 10:49:00 PM
Too much truth in your limerick has me wincing about a misdirected skyrocket in my youth. Thanks for the memory Paul - Lindsay
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/7/2015 7:58:00 AM
Have you ever wondered how we survived childhood--no safety caps on medicine bottles, no safety belts, no bicycle helmets? I rejoice that you survived; otherwise we wouldn't have your exquisite story poems. . . . Thanks for your comment, Lindsay
Date: 9/26/2015 10:28:00 AM
Ha Ha. I enjoyed this funny write.Maybe next time Billy will get the wiring right:-)Alexis
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/27/2015 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, for your kindness and thoughtfulness in commenting. I'm pleased you enjoyed the limerick. All the best to you and your loved ones.